050211a Diverted Attention Poem by Manonton Dalan

050211a Diverted Attention

Rating: 5.0


clouds sap my energy
looking trying to comfort
fleeting voices in sky
i should visit my pillow
early to re-arrange
these feathers mulching

i end up watching bulls
manhandled by hawks
where is mike, yes mike
he is playing golf now
people change with time
you might be left behind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 03 May 2011

Nice poem with plenty of depth. Beautifully conceived. Good vivid imagery. Great stuff. A perfect...10 Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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