Luis Gil de la Puente
Saturday, June 17, 2006

((10) Fly

Rating: 5.0
Let´s fly kites.

I´ve been working on one
And I can feel it strong
in my fingers.

I´ve got the right thread,
it´s windy,
it´s a clear winter morning,
and there is no class today.

I will feel your cold hands
While I teach you to let go,
To feel the air,
the blow, the whisper, loneliness.

And then the greyhounds will come and sit
To take a look at us
Luis Gil de la Puente
Sarwar Chowdhury 01 July 2009
remarkable indeed! ......10+
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Lady Grace 13 June 2009
beauttiful as expressed..kite is like a bird, it shows freedom..grace
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The kite is indeed a symbol. Flying up bu staying grounded down. You feel the air and imagine but also you feel the ground and stay logic (as in my poem Sophia) . Thanks Luis Gil. I give it a 10. I really enjoyed it. So fresh, so cool, so free!
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Ashraful Musaddeq 20 September 2008
A moving composition with beautiful metaphors,10 for it.
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Ben Gieske 21 June 2008
I had no trouble with this one this time immediately understanding the significance of the greyhounds.
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Vidyadhar Durgekar 11 June 2008
Excellent vision................good poem
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Ben Gieske 17 June 2007
Quite intriguing. I will have to think about this more. A very strong message not easily learned but vital to becoming and being human in the best meaning. Not surprizing then that you are flying kites in the cold of the winter.
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Sandra Fowler 08 October 2006
The gray and white charm of a winter morning captured successfully in this windblown word painting. Lovely work, Luis. Warm regards, Sandra
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Pia Andersson 20 August 2006
not so many words but a lot of meaning...i like that the greyhounds are watching...a beautiful 'naked' poem I can see you there Very beautiful-Pia
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