Luis Gil de la Puente

Luis Gil de la Puente (Palencia-Spain)

Poems by Luis Gil de la Puente : 6 / 84

((12) Breakfast With Diamonds - Poem by Luis Gil de la Puente

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A cold shower
Is a good way
To open my eyes.

I wake up with the stare
of those clean weightless
compasionate eyes,
filling me with motionless
sweet energy.

Peace, wide forehead,
translucient skin
of your huge eyed look,
Amelia.

I wish you could feel the diamonds.

Luis Gil de la Puente

Poems by Luis Gil de la Puente : 6 / 84

Will Barber (4/2/2009 7:08:00 PM)
Hugely successful poem, Luis. Captures a precious sense of life's best. - Will (Report)Reply
Anjali Sinha (11/25/2008 7:19:00 AM)
wow! ! ! ! ! excellent--- I not only felt the diamonds but the corals rubies and sapphires too
regards anjali (Report)Reply
Kesav Easwaran (10/24/2008 6:22:00 AM)
loving...encouraging...enthusing...this diamond write...who is more lucky there? 10 (Report)Reply
Barbara Villabol (10/16/2008 1:29:00 PM)
How Lovely. Your soul and heart are beautiful and full of appreciation for the one you love. Please read my poem A Shadow, an Echo. (Report)Reply
Sarwar Chowdhury (7/28/2008 2:38:00 PM)
The title is amazing!
poem is fine too
10+ (Report)Reply
Jurietta Duraan (3/16/2008 5:17:00 AM)
What the previous 6 people said... cool poem.... Diamonds can cut severely and cleanly... (Report)Reply
Tara very irritated with PH injustice (3/3/2008 2:25:00 PM)
That sure is one hell of an analogy.

Showering has never been so thought of. I'm impressed. t x (Report)Reply
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof (3/1/2008 3:57:00 AM)
you could be the diamond, too. (Report)Reply
Omar Chahine (4/15/2007 2:46:00 AM)
Short and sweet, no better way, no better subject (Report)Reply
Pia Andersson (9/23/2006 10:41:00 AM)
The title is superb...mornings like that can help you through difficult times...a jewel from you (Report)Reply
Preeti - is here! (9/4/2006 11:37:00 PM)
Umm i expected a yummy breakfast spread, but this one was beautiful. very well written!

Preets (Report)Reply
Joseph Daly (8/18/2006 8:35:00 AM)
This is a beautiful poem Luis. Admittedly it was the title that caught me but I am so glad that it has. The flow and the lovely imagery are a real treat. (Report)Reply