Luis Gil de la Puente
Friday, August 18, 2006

((12) Breakfast With Diamonds

Rating: 2.9
A cold shower
Is a good way
To open my eyes.

I wake up with the stare
of those clean weightless
compasionate eyes,
filling me with motionless
sweet energy.

Peace, wide forehead,
translucient skin
of your huge eyed look,

I wish you could feel the diamonds.
Luis Gil de la Puente
Will Barber 02 April 2009
Hugely successful poem, Luis. Captures a precious sense of life's best. - Will
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Anjali Sinha 25 November 2008
wow! ! ! ! ! excellent--- I not only felt the diamonds but the corals rubies and sapphires too regards anjali
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Kesav Easwaran 24 October 2008
loving...encouraging...enthusing...this diamond write...who is more lucky there? 10
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Barbara Villabol 16 October 2008
How Lovely. Your soul and heart are beautiful and full of appreciation for the one you love. Please read my poem A Shadow, an Echo.
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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 July 2008
The title is amazing! poem is fine too 10+
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Jurietta Duraan 16 March 2008
What the previous 6 people said... cool poem.... Diamonds can cut severely and cleanly...
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That sure is one hell of an analogy. Showering has never been so thought of. I'm impressed. t x
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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 March 2008
you could be the diamond, too.
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Omar Chahine 15 April 2007
Short and sweet, no better way, no better subject
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Pia Andersson 23 September 2006
The title is superb...mornings like that can help you through difficult times...a jewel from you
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