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((12) Breakfast With Diamonds

Rating: 2.9

A cold shower
Is a good way
To open my eyes.

I wake up with the stare
of those clean weightless
compasionate eyes,
filling me with motionless
sweet energy.

Peace, wide forehead,
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 March 2008

you could be the diamond, too.

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Omar Chahine 15 April 2007

Short and sweet, no better way, no better subject

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Pia Andersson 23 September 2006

The title is superb...mornings like that can help you through difficult times...a jewel from you

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Preeti - is here! 04 September 2006

Umm i expected a yummy breakfast spread, but this one was beautiful. very well written! Preets

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Joseph Daly 18 August 2006

This is a beautiful poem Luis. Admittedly it was the title that caught me but I am so glad that it has. The flow and the lovely imagery are a real treat.

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Will Barber 02 April 2009

Hugely successful poem, Luis. Captures a precious sense of life's best. - Will

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Anjali Sinha 25 November 2008

wow! ! ! ! ! excellent--- I not only felt the diamonds but the corals rubies and sapphires too regards anjali

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Kesav Easwaran 24 October 2008

loving...encouraging...enthusing...this diamond write...who is more lucky there? 10

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Barbara Villabol 16 October 2008

How Lovely. Your soul and heart are beautiful and full of appreciation for the one you love. Please read my poem A Shadow, an Echo.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 28 July 2008

The title is amazing! poem is fine too 10+

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