A cold shower
Is a good way
To open my eyes.
I wake up with the stare
of those clean weightless
filling me with motionless
Peace, wide forehead,
of your huge eyed look,
I wish you could feel the diamonds.
Short and sweet, no better way, no better subject
Umm i expected a yummy breakfast spread, but this one was beautiful. very well written! Preets
This is a beautiful poem Luis. Admittedly it was the title that caught me but I am so glad that it has. The flow and the lovely imagery are a real treat.
What the previous 6 people said... cool poem.... Diamonds can cut severely and cleanly...
Hugely successful poem, Luis. Captures a precious sense of life's best. - Will
wow! ! ! ! ! excellent--- I not only felt the diamonds but the corals rubies and sapphires too regards anjali
loving...encouraging...enthusing...this diamond write...who is more lucky there? 10
How Lovely. Your soul and heart are beautiful and full of appreciation for the one you love. Please read my poem A Shadow, an Echo.
The title is amazing! poem is fine too 10+
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
you could be the diamond, too.