It's 10 to 10, and i'm lying here awake again.
10 to 10, and the lightnings flashing again.
10 to 10, the church bells are ringing again.
10 to 10, and that old feelings setting in again.
10 to 10, time shouts and then whispers again.
10 to 10, my heart skips a beat again.
It's 10 to 10, and that old familiar branch sways
and creaks again.
It's 10 to 10, and I know dawn will show her light again.
It's 10 to 10, when a whippoorwill cries out again.
It's 10 to 10, that he hushes me again.
It's 10 to 10, till God says when, sleep'll come again. But
till then, talk to me until you can dream again.
I cannot find something to write about this jewel except, bravo!
Thank you! .. Kostas, For such a very kind reply! .. The depth and beauty in your poetry shows, like a painting that touches hearts ever so! .. Thank you! .. Ever so many blessings! ..
Very wonderfully you have penned this poem. Ten to ten! .. amusing. I love all lines yet the following lines are much impressive...... 10 to 10, the church bells are ringing again. 10 to 10, and that old feelings setting in again. - - - - - It's 10 to 10, till God says when, sleep'll come again. But till then, talk to me until you can dream again. Thanks for sharing this lovely poem. Voting....10 to 10.
Thank you! .. Kumarmani, Your words are ever so appreciated, thank you for your beautiful reply! .. Your poetry dances with inspiration and delight, painted with such beauty, heart, and insight! .. God bless! ..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Awesome and 10 again, this my rating for your poem...10
Thank you! .. Mohammed, For your beautiful and kind reply! .. Your poetry is so inspiring with such heart and beauty, flowing with words painted ever so moving! .. Ever so many blessings! ..