Jennifer Rondeau

Rookie - 309 Points (03/16/90 / Seoul)

Murder Me - Poem by Jennifer Rondeau

Kill me,
Jump Me,
End my life like I care,
Take this gun and shoot me,
Don’t look,
Don’t Stop,
Just murder me,
Just end my life tonight,
As I no longer care,
Or dare to speak of his name,
Or cry out his name in vein,
Murder me,
Murder me here,
Just end it now,
End my suffering,
Make it go away,
Just help me from feeling this rage inside of me bursting to get out,
Please kill me here,
Take this knife and murder me.

Comments about Murder Me by Jennifer Rondeau

  • Lungelo S Mbuyazi (11/25/2017 4:46:00 AM)

    Just end my life tonight, says it all.

    Love poem.
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  • Subhas Chandra Chakra (10/20/2017 6:40:00 AM)

    A rare Poem exposing deep anguish against the system as well as the surroundings.
    But can a person of your cadre be killed just with a knife, just by killing your body?
    You are not a mere object to be victimized by a physical murder.
    Your poem makes me remember a poem Tree, taught in +2 classes in India. A tree can't be killed easily.
    Hoe else can be a sensible poet?
    Good poetry. Loved the flow.10+++ for it.
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  • Binayakumar Mohanty (10/20/2017 1:37:00 AM)

    Inner suffering is well manifested But mam please see with my poem Opening eyes. Everything is bright and beautiful. Nicely crafted poem. Thanks. (Report) Reply

  • (10/4/2017 5:05:00 AM)

    Fascinating narration!
    Murder me,
    Murder me here,
    Just end it now,
    End my suffering,
    Make it go away
    - I loved the style of writing! Great! !
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  • James Mclain Is It Poetry (4/18/2017 3:24:00 PM)

    LOL.. premature death instead of life,
    You now live is not the if one is dead instead alive.
    The bounty in the sea, blue waves, that
    Stay the color that one lives to only give.. oil.. James
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  • James Mclain Is It Poetry (11/18/2016 1:07:00 AM)

    what have you done?
    a black cloud of pain as emotions disappear.
    once we were together in innocence,
    wide-eyed and untainted,
    but your thirst drifted away.
    a painful fever of agony -
    tears follow darkness, follow rain,
    love ground to dust.
    in a storm of righteousness,
    i see you in your dream's
    while I'm
    awake and you can't screen.. iip
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  • (11/6/2016 2:59:00 PM)

    do you need someone to talk to? (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (3/15/2015 1:28:00 AM)

    A desperate but truthful voice of one who cannot silence the skeptics and therefore, craving for death. This is an emotional entreat. Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • Abekah Emmanuel (10/26/2014 3:17:00 PM)

    I do like this poem too because of its unique style. However, I am not getting clearly the message you wish to communicate. Indeed, we all go through such times as you are going through this poem, but there is no action without a reason. To tell someone to end your life is very critical and one cannot take such a bold decision without any reason in mind. Therefore, I would prefer you, at least, gave us a clue of why you are taking this rather odd decision. Good poem though! (Report) Reply

  • (12/28/2012 7:43:00 AM)

    Its so simple but the story behind it seems so complicated. I luv it! ! (Report) Reply

  • (12/12/2012 12:23:00 PM)

    I love it! It's so relatable for me (Report) Reply

  • (5/13/2012 2:04:00 AM)

    gurl anit no man worth losing your life, but good poem (Report) Reply

  • (11/29/2009 10:40:00 PM)

    if u die like that u would go to hell and i think that murder is wrong but still good poem! (Report) Reply

  • (3/7/2009 3:39:00 PM)

    i really do like your poem, (Report) Reply

  • (12/9/2008 8:41:00 AM)

    best freaking poem i have read all day (Report) Reply

  • (4/3/2008 7:57:00 PM)

    That was awesome. good job (Report) Reply

  • (1/31/2007 6:29:00 PM)

    hey gurl, i noe how u feel b/c i was just like dat wen i got mad 2 another preson 4 no f* reason! (Report) Reply

  • (11/23/2006 10:46:00 AM)

    i no how u feel but murder isent the answer. (Report) Reply

  • (9/16/2006 3:21:00 PM)

    i have felt like this before. i like your poems. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 8, 2006

Poem Edited: Tuesday, August 24, 2010

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