1. ALL IN ONE, ONE IN ALL
Divine Confluence
To ocean rivers flow
Water finally
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2. CYBER CHARGER
Dawn at Dusk
Tiresome day refreshed
Someone comes online
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‘Dawn at Dusk’ total U-Turn…Someone yea must come as the ambience is on-line…Masterly Mr. V. Ms. Nivedita UK 10/10
Nice ones Vinod...As one who loves reading and writing Japanese style poetyr...I must say both these are good.
Hey! ! ! ! ! ! These were nice haikus written........You are better than me my friend wish to have my words turn out like yours! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 10+++++++++
wowwwwwwwww i really luvvvvvvvvvv vit you have now mastered this section of poetry too great keept it up A+++ and 10++ too anjali
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
# 1 comes across really great