Manonton Dalan

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120210i I Think So - Poem by Manonton Dalan

there's a recycle bin by corner
i deposited my water bottle
that's one less floating by sea
i look around me tall buildings
so close to sea; like straight cliffs
i wonder if that causes erosion

maybe it would cause a water lift
when wind comes; slam on sand
and waves take sand away..hmm
on street i could smell exhaust gas
from cars reeving, passing by me
that could be worst than smoking


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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 2, 2010

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 5, 2010


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