12th June 2010 Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

12th June 2010



I banked the table very hard twice because,
I was tired of the negative systems around me;
Oh, what kind of people are these? !

12th June 2010,
And of the dirty chains around my neck;
For these people do not understand the sense of life.

Why can't they understand me for what i am made of?
Why can't they understand me for who i am?
For i need my freedom to represent my status in this land.

Monday, June 21, 2010
Topic(s) of this poem: chains,freedom,june,people
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Prince Obed de la Cruz 25 June 2010

yes... it is also with freedom that one can show who he really is.... nice poem!

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Unwritten Soul 21 June 2010

I think u love number a lot, most of ur poems titled with number...This poem seems like good diary for u to express all, believe me it is unique...but i still wonder why u like to take numbers in all your poem titles, after read about your biography well it answer me now, u are mathematician and what a surprise is u love art/drawing too just like me...i am biologist, love painting.well keep good work friend

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