ମିଳନ ର ରଙ୍ଗ- 16 (Milana Ra Ranga -016/Odia Poem) Poem by Subhas Chandra Chakra

ମିଳନ ର ରଙ୍ଗ- 16 (Milana Ra Ranga -016/Odia Poem)

Rating: 4.7

ଆମ ନିଜ ନିଜ ପରିଧି ରୁ

କେନ୍ଦ୍ର ର ଆଡକୁ

ଆଉଜିବା, ଛାତି ଆମ

ଆହୁରି ପାଖ କୁ ।


ଆକାଶ ର ଅଗଣା ରେ

ଫୁଲ ହୋଇ

ଫୁଟୁ ଥିବ ତାରା,


ମୋ ମୁହଁ ରେ ତୁମ ଓଠ

ଦେଉଥିବ

ସ୍ପର୍ଶ ଅପାଶୋରା ।।

ମିଳନ ର ରଙ୍ଗ- 16 (Milana Ra Ranga -016/Odia Poem)
Thursday, November 2, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: longing,love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A meeting with the soul mate, even if in a dream, adds colours to the life.
Before the limbs or lips or hands feel each other, the soul and the heart starts reading each other, feeling each other, getting into one form of existence. One lives for the other, dedicates all the desires just to keep the counterpart happy and eternally alive.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suratha Kumar Rout 04 November 2017

ଆକାଶ ର ଅଗଣା ରେ ଫୁଲ ହୋଇ ଫୁଟୁ ଥିବ ତାରା, ମୋ ମୁହଁ ରେ ତୁମ ଓଠ ଦେଉଥିବ ସ୍ପର୍ଶ ଅପାଶୋରା ।। One lives for the other, dedicates all the desires just to keep the counterpart happy and eternally alive. Lovely poem shared. 10++++

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Seema Sharma Rimi 03 November 2017

ଆକାଶ ର ଅଗଣା ରେ ଫୁଲ ହୋଇ ଫୁଟୁ ଥିବ ତାରା, ମୋ ମୁହଁ ରେ ତୁମ ଓଠ ଦେଉଥିବ ସ୍ପର୍ଶ ଅପାଶୋରା ।। Love this poem so much. Thanks for sharing it. 10+++++

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Prativa Rani 03 November 2017

ଆକାଶ ର ଅଗଣା ରେ ଫୁଲ ହୋଇ ଫୁଟୁ ଥିବ ତାରା, ମୋ ମୁହଁ ରେ ତୁମ ଓଠ ଦେଉଥିବ ସ୍ପର୍ଶ ଅପାଶୋରା ।। Beautiful poem.10+++

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Sabita Sahoo 03 November 2017

ମୋ ମୁହଁ ରେ ତୁମ ଓଠ ଦେଉଥିବ ସ୍ପର୍ଶ ଅପାଶୋରା ।। Wow, what a lovely wording for the beloved. 10+++ for this sharing.

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Sanjukta Sahoo 02 November 2017

ଆକାଶ ର ଅଗଣା ରେ ଫୁଲ ହୋଇ ଫୁଟୁ ଥିବ ତାରା, Beautifully penned romance. 10+++ for the poem shared.

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