16 Mother Earth Poem by Athul KrishnaA

16 Mother Earth

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Oh! `It's so hot
just Four million years ago
I was only cracked
now i am baked
I gave man shelter
And he started ruining me
Oh! sister venus
Oh! reddy mars
Oh! the pain
Oh! The heat
oh god please help me!
To stand all this
Oh! What all i have to bear
For just becoming earth! ! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mamta Agarwal 11 May 2008

your awareness of the helpless of mother earth is really great. we all need to something to save our planet.

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Rema Prasanna 05 May 2008

Good poem on mother of all being, well done Athul. Keep writing

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Priyanka Shetty 26 April 2008

u r really a great poet... keep it up.......... keep writing athul........ and we will keep reading.... :)

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Kee Thampi 21 April 2008

this poet really a poet of earth gave man shelter And he started ruining me Oh!

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