Athul KrishnaA

Rookie - 0 Points (17th august 1997 / Kottayam, Kerala)

16 Mother Earth - Poem by Athul KrishnaA

Oh! `It's so hot
just Four million years ago
I was only cracked
now i am baked
I gave man shelter
And he started ruining me
Oh! sister venus
Oh! reddy mars
Oh! the pain
Oh! The heat
oh god please help me!
To stand all this
Oh! What all i have to bear
For just becoming earth! ! !


Comments about 16 Mother Earth by Athul KrishnaA

  • (5/11/2008 8:42:00 PM)


    your awareness of the helpless of mother earth is really great. we all need to something to save our planet. (Report) Reply

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  • (5/5/2008 1:05:00 AM)


    Good poem on mother of all being, well done Athul. Keep writing (Report) Reply

  • (4/26/2008 3:17:00 PM)


    u r really a great poet... keep it up.......... keep writing athul........ and we will keep reading.... :) (Report) Reply

  • (4/21/2008 11:32:00 PM)


    this poet really a poet of earth
    gave man shelter
    And he started ruining me
    Oh!
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 12, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, April 12, 2008


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