.2. Bottle-Top Bandits Poem by David Threadgold

.2. Bottle-Top Bandits

Rating: 5.0


Blue-tits on bottle-tops
Pecking for cream
Perks for the early-birds
Worked in a team

Cute little thieves
Don’t wear a mask
Take just a little
But never do ask


© 2008 David Threadgold
Rambling Riddles & Rhymes

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bob Blackwell 25 October 2008

You painted the picture so well, thanks for reminding me.

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Stacey Watts 16 October 2008

What a lovely poem. The image is so clear. Great piece.

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Tj Becker 16 October 2008

A really cool poem. I enjoy watching birds busy in their day. A peaceful picture for the mind.

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James Roberts 16 October 2008

Reminds me of my childhood in the frozen north.The only birds you see in london yhese days are in the naturalhistory museum jim

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Linda Winchell 15 October 2008

Cute and to the point! 10~!

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