David Threadgold

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.2. A Mystery - Poem by David Threadgold

Look beyond the stars and planets
Through the vastness of deep space
To the edge of mans own vision
Travel to this unknown place

To find there’s only darkness?
The same as seen before
But it’s hard to tell the difference
When you’re on a mystery tour


© 2008 David Threadgold
Rambling Riddles & Rhymes


Comments about .2. A Mystery by David Threadgold

  • Tsira Goge (10/26/2008 12:30:00 PM)

    But it’s hard to tell the difference
    When you’re on a mystery tour....
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    It you have told very expressively, gallantly...10...
    Tsira
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  • Shimon Weinroth (10/2/2008 6:42:00 AM)

    worse yet when you have nothing to measure by

    well done 10
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  • Anjali Sinha (9/23/2008 11:20:00 AM)

    enigma
    stars planets and that
    unkown place
    nice
    thanks for sharing this
    great write +10
    regards anju
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  • Ashraful MusaddeqAshraful Musaddeq (9/23/2008 10:55:00 AM)

    My 10 for the last wonderful stanza. (Report)Reply

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  • Marilyn LottMarilyn Lott (9/22/2008 8:31:00 PM)

    A mystery indeed! We do not know what is out there and it's pretty exciting. Loved your poem, David.

    Warm Wishes,
    Marilyn
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  • Fay SlimmFay Slimm (9/22/2008 7:52:00 AM)

    Mystery must have been on both our minds Dave.as we have both put one up with the same theme mmmmm is it great minds thinking alike? But the question you pose has to answered one day. Good write. from Fay. (Report)Reply

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  • Tia Maria (9/22/2008 7:45:00 AM)

    Gave this quite a lot of thought...

    No! I cannot imagine there is nothing...

    :) may we always have stars in our eyes
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  • Jean Mallette (9/13/2008 8:28:00 AM)

    Great poem David. It gets you to thinking how boring life must be for the astronaut. No 'landmarks' or lovely scenery to view as you travel along, just the same old occasional stars or star dust zooming by. Wouldn't you hate to just 'lose it' out there in space with no shrinks around? 10 (Report)Reply

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  • Shimon Weinroth (9/13/2008 6:51:00 AM)

    well said, the nostalgia of infinity remains a mystery
    best wishes
    Shimon
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, September 9, 2008

Poem Edited: Tuesday, October 14, 2008


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