poet sarwar chowdhury

sarwar chowdhury

2- The Untitled Love Verses

a.
I am a passer-by here on the way to eternity
and she too.
O Angel-like woman
Come near, wait for a while
Let me see your to praise for
God's artwork.

b.
She told
she is touched by heart-felt words of mine
but she did not know-
those words came out
because I were touched by her floral mind!

c.
I am missing you
and my heart cry looking at far
Be blessed o dear wherever you are!

d.
One sight I see with two eyes
Everyday the sun has a rise.

e.
Beloved offered a dream
that was sweeter than all sweet
I can not explain the gleam
came across, fearing if she quit.

f.
Thirsty classic soil
every inch thirsty

Kisses are travelling
and she bestows
and he bestows
Passion has stopped the time

The mingled love uncovered them
suppressed feeling of agony has gone
Flesh and spirit make a math-
one plus one equal to one (1+1=1) .
They have been meaning each other.


g.
Yes, I am a perfect stranger
I am alone, I am a passer-by
Believe me, I don’t know who am I.

h.
Trust not the lust-driven lover, never
A true lover can not be cruel ever.

i.
How much pain infused in my heart you don't know!
Yet I am living with your feeling wherever you go!


J.
Why are you looking at that bright star, dear!
That is twinkling
That is giggling
That is crying
That has magnetism
That has tremendous radiance.
Have you obsessed!
Be quite please be quite!

Bcause that can not be touched
Because that can not be owned.
Because that can be loved only from far away!

Just be choked with tears when it would be out of sight for ever!

©copyright by sarwar chowdhury. all rights reserved.

Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 24, 2008
Poem Edited: Monday, July 27, 2009

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  • Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK (11/27/2009 2:29:00 PM)

    ‘…Kisses are traveling // and she bestows // and he bestows // Passion has stopped the time…’

    Excellent sojourner dear my Poet…brilliance galore..
    Ten+++
    Ms. Nivedita
    UK

    Cordially invite you read my poems with comments and….please watch out new posts: RECIPE OF MY FIRST KISS
    niv

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  • Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (9/2/2009 11:18:00 AM)

    '...Thirsty classic soil
    every inch thirsty...'

    Why for?
    Written in 'white-ink'.
    Namaste-ji and Namaskar.
    Ten
    dr. sakti

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  • Kelly Kel (2/22/2009 2:56:00 PM)

    very nice! I love your unique style and the important meaning behind your words.

    If you have time could you take a look at some of mine.

    Best!

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  • Miriam Maia PaduaMiriam Maia Padua (1/15/2009 12:56:00 AM)

    beautiful piece....titled beautifully...interesting
    every verses hides pain and longing of love
    very creative in style.....
    very unique....10+++++

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  • Rinzu Susan Rajan (10/20/2008 3:00:00 AM)

    WOW... IN THE TOP 500...

    IT S WRITTEN WITH A DIFFERING STYLE THT ONE DOESNT SEE TODAY...

    GREAT EFFORT AT UNTITLED LOVE VERSES...

    :)

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  • Nia Riz (9/5/2008 8:18:00 AM)

    well written. i am not that good to judge poems as i am still a kid, but i sure can say that this poem was a beautiful one. and i can see that it is one among the top 500 poems. congrats.

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  • Samanwaya Njaaneya (9/4/2008 4:00:00 AM)

    The steam of love...perfect! ! .................good work............all d best.........

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  • Moushumi moushumi (9/3/2008 8:27:00 AM)

    It has been instilled into my mind with a title 'True Love or the cruel lover'. Absolutely correct but had it been otherwise i could not have read an excellent verse from you.

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  • Koyel Mitra (9/3/2008 6:11:00 AM)

    Excellent love poem, written with a lot of feel.Very enjoyable read!

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  • Sumita Datta (9/2/2008 8:51:00 PM)

    Wow! ! ! liked most the below two lines...
    (How much pain infused in my heart you don't know!
    Yet I am living with your feeling wherever you go!)

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  • Atef AyadiAtef Ayadi (9/2/2008 2:24:00 PM)

    i read your poems
    and all the options
    in order
    sometimes
    i skip
    i am always look for more hidden details.

    now that i finally read your optional poem
    without any heart damage or attacks;
    it looks that you are easily creative and seductive, but i hopped more
    more gas and more effective burning love's fire.

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  • Onelia Avelar (8/31/2008 3:03:00 AM)

    ...'touched by heart-felt words of' yours - the heart-felt, passionate words of love are the clue to the charm of your poem - they make it really touching!

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  • Christopher Rivera (8/30/2008 3:16:00 PM)

    very interesting, makes me all warm inside.

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  • Deepti Agarwal (8/28/2008 6:46:00 AM)

    beautifully crafted piece of work... absolutely amazing....

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  • Geeta Nair (8/28/2008 5:40:00 AM)

    Imagination well penned.........gud work, loved....
    regards,
    geets

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  • Tissa Calvert (8/27/2008 3:11:00 PM)

    this was my favorite one

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  • Stacey Watts (8/27/2008 2:14:00 PM)

    Very beautifully written and full of imagery. Good write.

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  • Juan Carlos Abeti (8/27/2008 2:14:00 PM)

    touching, excellent....

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  • Wanelisa Albert (8/27/2008 11:56:00 AM)

    this is an amazing poem.
    very honest, potraying unashamed passions.
    these lines jump out to touch my heart
    'Beloved offered a dream
    that was sweeter than all sweet'
    i have fallen in love with these words.
    Thank You

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  • Petra Soliman (8/27/2008 6:11:00 AM)

    This poem is so beautiful, its full of meanings and its just perfect, thanks for writing such a poem!

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