6. Say ….? ? ? ? ? ? ….. ‘click’ Poem by Abha Sharma

6. Say ….? ? ? ? ? ? ….. ‘click’

Rating: 3.8


My esteemed reader
Warm greetings welcome you
But ah! Something is missing
It should be between us
Yes….here it comes!
Say ….Cheese….. ‘CLICK’

The distance between us now erased
With your flexing muscles,
Your beauty enhanced
With this gesture’s blaze.

What do we lose?
With a little stimuli,
The earth becomes heaven
With your sweet smile.

Your eyes sparkle
And love does bloom
Wrinkles delayed
Happiness makes room.

A Smile is a pleasure
A Smile is an honor
Pluralism has no space
Serene Notions stimulate.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Andrew mark Wilkinson 04 May 2008

Abha, you can't go wrong in this world if you can make one person smile, say cheese and pose for a while.. Andrew 10

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R.k Das 30 April 2008

the word imagery is marvellous, the theme lofty and for every reader to happily indulge, could you re-think on the title? thanx

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Karen Delta 29 April 2008

this is such a fun poem! makes me giddy :)

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Roger Cornish 29 April 2008

Everything in a smile.... rx

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Janri Gogeshvili 28 April 2008

Yes, I have smiled … original, beautiful meditation … Thank you...

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Lost Poet 01 November 2009

really gr8 work dear....... keep it up...

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Lost Poet 01 November 2009

really gr8 work dear....... keep it up...

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C. P. Sharma 19 May 2008

Wow! what a poetic appeal to the electronic media. A click does wonders.Art blooms with appreciation. It creates a genius. But you have established yourself by now. You are a name to recon with. Keep it up. Excelsior!

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David Desantis 12 May 2008

Great one Abha! I almost blinked when you said click haha

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As Serene Notions, this poem stimulates me to the liking for its author. So I'd like te greet her in a way which will please her: with a lovely smile.

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