Wednesday, May 7, 2008

Stream Of Consciousness

Rating: 4.3
The canvas of Human mind
Conveys the multidimensional kind,
By the three Layers of consciousness
And the double layer of time.

‘Consciousness’ is governed by the clock
Camouflage perceptions in its growth
Mechanical time leads the life
Where birth and death constantly strive

The ‘inner duree’ records the atom
As it falls on the mental plate,
Sub-consciously irregular in its movement
Phases of growth, in the chaotic crate

Thus plays our life’s orchestra
In its imperative cryptic wisdom.
Abha Sharma
Dipika P 22 May 2008
simply great..gud one!
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Egi David Perdana 21 May 2008
I'm crying, i'm crying and i'm crying
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Vidyadhar Durgekar 20 May 2008
Three layer of consciousness........................Thoughts of hidden dimension..........tangible existence and intangible faith..........nice poem
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Andrew Blakemore 20 May 2008
Great poem Abha. A very thought provoking piece of work. Well done. Andrew
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Usha Pisharody 18 May 2008
Another great metaphorical poem. You use words to maximum effect, Abha, and they stay true...!
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Egi David Perdana 17 May 2008
amazing poem I love it
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Egi David Perdana 17 May 2008
amazing poem I love it
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Egi David Perdana 17 May 2008
amazing poem I love it
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Chom Chom 16 May 2008
very nice....... from ya pal, Chom Chom
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Leonard Daranjo 15 May 2008
The mind is an enigma out which emanate continous streams of finished, semi finished and half finished thought. Emerson says 'In every great work of art, you will find your own rejected thoughts - they come back to you with an alienated majesty' The Stream of Consciousness is indeed one of my favourite subjects - recalls to my mind James Joyce and Aldous Huxley. Your poem is a highly inspired piece and does well to bring out the subtle nuances of the Stream of Consciousness. Enjoyed reading the piece. Thanks
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