Living
A breath in trance;
With
An incessant struggle;
Towards
An elfin joy;
For
An eternal hope;
Abides
A phenomenal routine;
Scrapped
A chronicle’s page;
Inspiring
Another breath in trance.
Very peaceful piece. If only everyone thought like you my friend. Regards Craig.
Hey is LFE really like this? ? wonderful that we still have life..
I wish life would have been like this... but in rality, it's a never ending itch!
'A breath in trance '. What do I make of this? I find this to be a more fascinating question than the one which inspired it. Perhaps, it is known in the east. In the west, there is no life or' breath in trance'. If I see a' breath in trance ', I shall tell you. That you will know that there is still life in the west. GW62
Dear Abhaji, Well written.... Here in Cochin, everything is a mess... So I feel: Life is a neverending itch!
Beautiful thoughts expressed in beautiful lines; 10/10! - Raj Nandy 30 May 08
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A breath in trance...... splendid line. Inspirational piece Abha