Sunday, March 16, 2008

What Is Life?

Rating: 3.3
A breath in trance;
An incessant struggle;
An elfin joy;
An eternal hope;
A phenomenal routine;
A chronicle’s page;
Another breath in trance.
Abha Sharma
Deepti Agarwal 15 October 2008
Hey is LFE really like this? ? wonderful that we still have life..
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premji premji 14 August 2008
I wish life would have been like this... but in rality, it's a never ending itch!
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Greenwolfe 1962 26 July 2008
'A breath in trance '. What do I make of this? I find this to be a more fascinating question than the one which inspired it. Perhaps, it is known in the east. In the west, there is no life or' breath in trance'. If I see a' breath in trance ', I shall tell you. That you will know that there is still life in the west. GW62
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premji premji 08 June 2008
Dear Abhaji, Well written.... Here in Cochin, everything is a mess... So I feel: Life is a neverending itch!
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My Sincere and Talented Friend; Abha; I'm happy to convey my opinion of your poem, 'What is Life' Do I address its content or literary value? Excellent for both? ? There was a time, many years past, when as a fledgling, I discovered poetry as therapy' My personal feeling then were expressed in terms of pain, depression and inquiry. Recovering, I winged off to quill for more unselfish purpose, indeed, for 'Living' life and messaging for Love and Peace. The following is by far, the best guidance I will ne'er forget of which I happily share with everyone. ...louie levy Horace (65 B.C.-8B.C.) aptly commented: 'Let your theme be what it may, provided it be simple and uniform; choose a theme suited to your powers, ye authors.' Beyond all doubt Levy’s theme sprouts out of his deep instinctive wisdom, which inspires him to say that we should be aware: Prophet, Profiteer, and Activist, All are one and the same ('Prophets And Predictions', Taj Mahal, June 2006, p.21) Dr Santosh Kumar, Editor http: //
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Raj Nandy 29 May 2008
Beautiful thoughts expressed in beautiful lines; 10/10! - Raj Nandy 30 May 08
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David Desantis 27 May 2008
whoa, very deep 'an incessant struggle' leads its way into 'elfin joy' i like that...i like the imagery of how troubling life can be but somehow elfs are more playful and innocent, maybe a place we wish to return sometimes.
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C. P. Sharma 19 May 2008
... a soul searching poem.
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Rema Prasanna 06 May 2008
Abha, I liked this poem, there is life in each line, flows beautifully, life is a breath in between one trance, good
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Deepti Agarwal 05 May 2008
Inspiring Another breath in trance. how true.... u did justice to yr well thoughts...
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