Tuesday, March 18, 2008

8. Eternal Friendship

Rating: 3.8
The two great friends Birth and Death
Conspired for humans, Lament and Breath;

The natal twinge the infant could never express
The soul’s departure nor the body could digress;

A rare MIRACLE, a life in life
Grows up to experience the worldly strife;

A child takes no time to mature fast
An adult leaves the post for he cannot last;

The wrinkles force to quit for Gen next
Their epochs are quoted in various texts;

Exit and Entrance prudently divine
Folded in mystery the unseen time.
Abha Sharma
Dr Yogesh Sharma 07 February 2009
great poem, excellent rhyme, very deep delved thoughts.
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Sarvesh Kulkarni 30 September 2008
Absolutely amazing. Each word and each line of this poem comes with an aura of deep thoughtfulness. Thank you very much for this wonderful poem.
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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 September 2008
A beautiful poem it is.10.
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Greenwolfe 1962 26 July 2008
This is a great writing. I wish I could understand it better, so I could give it a ten instead of a nine. GW62
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C. P. Sharma 14 July 2008
Awesome! Your poem moves with Miltonic dignity. I liked the opening lines: 'The two great friends Birth and Death Conspired for humans, Lament and Breath.' You are a already a great and recognized poet. While commenting on your poems I feel small as if I am showing lamp to the Sun.
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Emancipation Planz 09 May 2008
Exquisite to Divine... keep righting them One Peace at a time,10derly Deana
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Sandra Fowler 08 May 2008
A lyrical write of great wisdom and beauty. Time will have us all. But words have the power to last forever. Kindest regards, Sandra
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Theresa Moore 27 April 2008
This is a fantastic poem that is very well written. You have captured with words the reality of life. What we must do is make our journey worthwhile. Thank you for sharing
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Loyd C Taylor Sr 25 April 2008
Hello again poet, wow this is an amazing poem, great work! L C Taylor
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Sadiqullah Khan 25 April 2008
ye good eternal dilemma
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