Tortured love in my heart, you tore it apart.
With the twist of a telephone wire,
you took away my utmost desire.
I cry for you through tear-filled eyes.
I long for your touch, I miss you oh so much.
Written: February 11/07
Short but mighty powerful write Melvina, , , , , , , , well done
Another great poem that is sad and very well written! So much said in so few words...Great job Melly! Keep up the great work. ((Hug)) =Shelley=
Melvina, short, but as beautiful as ever. Great wordage as ever. Thanks for sharing it. David
Stark emotion; how you manage it poetically I don't knowm but you do. Torture is right.
Very revealing line...with a twist of a telephone wire... Awesome...next... Hugs, dee
And you put it all, oh so well, Thankyou for sharing your art Love duncan X
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'Missing you', two very sad words. Eloquent write, Melvina. Kindest regards, Sandra