(935) Make Me Smile Poem by Melvina Germain

(935) Make Me Smile

Rating: 4.8


I close my eyes and think only of you,
for you are my drink of champagne,
my light, my treasure, my cup of tea,
my love, you are everything to me.

I see a smiling face with eyes that glow.
You dazzle, a star of a great picture show.
You are truly the apple of my eye.
You stand out while other’s walk by.

My thoughts are filled with images of you,
baby, I can’t think of anything I’d rather do.
Will you give me your love, and walk down the aisle.
Oh please baby, make me smile.

Written: April 17,2008

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Harris 20 April 2008

Mel, now if I wasn't married and wee younger than I am I would take you up on that tempting offer. Sadly I am married and a wee older that I look., so I'll have to decline in the nicest possible way. Beautiful poem and wonderful read. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend. David

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WOW, Melvina...you were in quite the mood when you wrote this! I Love this piece...it is sweet and Beautiful! Did you write this while listening to music? Keep sharing your imagery full poetry that heals us, your readers.........and sustains us...like food for the soul, Smile! Hope to sea you again soon my friend. P.S The water is cominggggggggg! ! Can't wait! God Bless

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Sandra Fowler 23 April 2008

What a warm and charming poem. A delight to read and more than worthy of a ten. Love, Sandra

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James B. Earley 22 April 2008

I detect a new way of walking, a new way of talking, and a new way of combing your hair.........and it's all very becomimg!

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 20 April 2008

Talking of champagne, this poem is so Bubbly too... Andy 10

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Ernestine Northover 20 April 2008

Lovely piece of work Melvina, a pleasure to read you once again. Lovely poem, dreamy and romantic. Great stuff. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Melvina Germain

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Sydney, Nova Scotia
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