Ashley Nichol

Rookie (February 4,1993 / I was born in a Hospital)

♥ My Perfect Angel ^j^ - Poem by Ashley Nichol

Perfectly placed sunbeams makes his hair glow.
The sparkle of his eyes when he looks at me is enough to die for.
He has the perfect angle at the corner of his beautifully shaped lips.
He has a smile that could be mistaken for the sun - the one that could light up this whole town.
The beautiful curve of his biceps.
The smoothness of his hand in mine.
The sound of his voice makes me tingle all over.
There is a light that shines right out of him.
He couldnt be any more perfect! !


Comments about ♥ My Perfect Angel ^j^ by Ashley Nichol

  • Bernard Snyder (9/20/2015 2:47:00 AM)

    Absolutely beautiful. It is such a great feeling when one finds such a person. Great poem! (Report)Reply

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  • Varanasi Ramabrahmam (8/29/2009 2:00:00 AM)

    Very interesting narration of love in a beautiful way. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/20/2009 9:24:00 AM)

    That truly is your perfect angel. Imaginatively penned. (Report)Reply

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  • (8/17/2009 5:11:00 PM)

    It's obvious you speak the language of the heart-the head don't speak the language of the heart-just keep reading other's work, including the classics and for goodness sakes don't stop writing! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/17/2009 1:50:00 PM)

    The beautiful curve of his biceps.
    The smoothness of his hand in mine.
    The sound of his voice makes me tingle all over.
    There is a light that shines right out of him.
    He couldnt be any more perfect! !

    its really a self sectred poem but make up is good, interesting, meaningful and making the readers think about you and they may consider you angel too.. keeping your tiny age, you are like angel true and respect you and your talent..appreciate it..10/10
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  • (8/5/2009 10:35:00 PM)

    u said it urself, u couldn't be more perfect (Report)Reply

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  • Prashant Shaurya (8/4/2009 10:35:00 AM)

    well u cudnt have described better...
    well it can make others fall in love too..
    tek care
    bye dear
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  • (8/4/2009 7:08:00 AM)

    when you are in love the whole world looks perfect...nice write (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, August 4, 2009



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