A Baby Angel Poem by lady grace

A Baby Angel

Rating: 4.5


can't stop the flowing water
from mountains high
dropp to the depth of wisdom
down to the deepest ocean..

open the stamina of love
spread the seeds of fertility
blow the fire of passion
to that sweet lovely beauty...

fragrance of purity
hides the defective glands
blossoms unidentified
draw the simple brands...

let X meet Y in the tube of life
lining vessels welcome.. stay for a while
long days and long exciting nights
after few months... comes a new life...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
dr veenaa rai 05 July 2009

what a lovely way to describe the start of life's journey!

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dr veenaa rai 05 July 2009

what a lovely way to describe the start of life's journey!

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Jason Mcgookin 05 July 2009

a nice clean way of describing the works of what nature intended for us to do i never thought of it that way...read my first time we made love pls...

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Oneline Poet 06 July 2009

Wonderful idea.....well thought out.....flows nicely

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Myrtle Thomas 07 July 2009

A way to look at life from another way to fertilize, although I do like the normal way! This reminds me of a poem I wrote on here called A BAG OF SEEDS, you might like it.I liked your subject and your form and flow very well penned.Great job

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Dwi Utami 03 August 2010

Can't stop the flowing water. From mountains high Dropp to the depth of wisdom down to the deepest ocean. Owww this is reality water never stop flowing forevermore..great of you tanks also for coment..+10

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 June 2010

‘Let X meet Y in the ‘tube of life’… after few months... comes a new life...’ Fine metaphors…wow! 10/10 [Gracefully] Ms. Nivedita UK

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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 19 January 2010

Ur poems have a touch of Blake' Songs of Innocence' Very nice. touching the deep of the heart

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Melanie Johnson 30 December 2009

Hi lady grace! This is beautiful! ! ! I am now your biggest fan. :) Blessings, Melanie

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ngaio beck 06 November 2009

The joy of our humanity, treated with grace and elegance

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