A Baby Angel

Rating: 4.5
can't stop the flowing water
from mountains high
dropp to the depth of wisdom
down to the deepest ocean..

open the stamina of love
spread the seeds of fertility
blow the fire of passion
to that sweet lovely beauty...

fragrance of purity
hides the defective glands
blossoms unidentified
draw the simple brands...

let X meet Y in the tube of life
lining vessels welcome.. stay for a while
long days and long exciting nights
after few months... comes a new life...
Monday, June 22, 2009
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COMMENTS
Dwi Utami 03 August 2010
Can't stop the flowing water. From mountains high Dropp to the depth of wisdom down to the deepest ocean. Owww this is reality water never stop flowing forevermore..great of you tanks also for coment..+10
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‘Let X meet Y in the ‘tube of life’… after few months... comes a new life...’ Fine metaphors…wow! 10/10 [Gracefully] Ms. Nivedita UK
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Dr. Ratan Bhattacharjee 19 January 2010
Ur poems have a touch of Blake' Songs of Innocence' Very nice. touching the deep of the heart
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Melanie Johnson 30 December 2009
Hi lady grace! This is beautiful! ! ! I am now your biggest fan. :) Blessings, Melanie
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ngaio beck 06 November 2009
The joy of our humanity, treated with grace and elegance
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Eyan Desir 03 November 2009
Excellent poetic...write
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 September 2009
let X meet Y in the tube of life lining vessels welcome.. stay for a while long days and long exciting nights after few months... comes a new life... what a lovely rehearsed poem with words and life and wish for exciting results after few months..All you have vividly expressed in few lines the bare facts of life..you desrve kodos for it.....10 read mine smiley...mother....mom i miss u
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Sherri Coulter 21 September 2009
ha....please, can't take any more.i need a break...everyone as lovely as the next best.............and comments to die for as well scores of 10's
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John Mcmanus 14 September 2009
hi lady grace, very nice poem here, I like the way it conveys the joy of birth.
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Raj Nandy 20 August 2009
This is a nice poem with novelty in it! The title is also very appropriate! 10! -Raj
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