lady grace

The Eyes Of Love

beauty of the ocean had gone by
wind swiped it dreadfully
nothing was there under the sea bed
only memories left on my head.

on the mountainous side, , , found a loving heart
cared my lost soul....gave his loving hand
motionless, speechless with an empty mind
healed the lost magnificient start...

his eyes never wink
nor give a chance to remark
his arms never wait
always ready to restart...

i found him in an empty shell
who laid and rest for awhile
he wore nothing on his lips
except a beautiful smile...

'come... come with me little darling
let's share this place where i stay
i have no treasure to give for you
i'm a beggar, nothing i can promise'...

as i step back..i realized...i don't need jewels
i don't need those beautiful vases
i only need a rose from a hand full of corn
a rose given to me filled with love by his own..

the man i loved never had a treasure in him
nor a big house where he can stay
he has nothing inside his shell
except a true heart he gave to me..

happiness can't be bought with bills
nor can't be a subject for business
love is not a product for sale
only true hearts can make it real..

Poem Submitted: Monday, June 8, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, July 14, 2009

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  • Obinna Eruchie (9/7/2009 7:01:00 AM)

    She has found true love in the eyes of love, despite his financial status-for 'money cannot buy love'. Nice one.

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  • The Young Phenomenon CJ Wright (6/27/2009 12:53:00 PM)

    a new set of eyes you created for me as love in this sense I now look in at a new perspective now great work well done 10/10

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  • Angelica Ayman (6/21/2009 7:13:00 AM)

    i love that poem it's really good! ! ! 10+++ hope to see more
    best regards

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  • Rm. Shanmugam ChettiarRm. Shanmugam Chettiar (6/20/2009 7:37:00 AM)

    a naive love poem. shan

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  • Howard Kern (6/19/2009 10:20:00 PM)

    wow! ! !
    I beleive you have hir the nail square on the head, and drove it home with just one blow.
    Exelent10++
    keep on sharing lady Grace

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  • Stevens CadetStevens Cadet (6/19/2009 11:05:00 AM)

    This is a good poem.

    I like the theme behind it but the only thing i would say is the rhythm seems off at times but still a good poem.

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  • Hana Behrs (6/19/2009 7:17:00 AM)

    I really like this one, keep writing :)

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  • Howard Kern (6/18/2009 6:04:00 PM)

    Quads have been very good to you very nice this is a good one! ! !
    Thanks for sharing
    have a blessed day
    howard

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  • Rafique Farooqi (6/16/2009 2:54:00 AM)

    love is prosperious in it`s worth, wayward winds of time wipe it`s glories, what so ever, the stability of fragile love lies in the fist of loving hearts

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  • Noel Horlanda (6/16/2009 2:35:00 AM)

    a profoundly written, a true dedication to a beloved. Nothing negative on this piece of work, lines are in deep thoughts, full of emotions and wisely said. However, what I believe that the eyes of love couldn't see, it's blind, isn't it? Thanks

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  • Lalitha iyer (6/16/2009 1:32:00 AM)

    The eyes of love
    are full of warmth
    it caresses you
    with hands invisible
    fills you with life
    and energy in strife
    it sends you messages
    fuelled with urge to strive.

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  • Ch J Satyananda Kumar (6/16/2009 1:11:00 AM)

    he wore nothing on his lips
    except a beautiful smile... Wonderful. Great. Yes true love never looks for wealth, position, assets etc. Kudos.

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  • Niken Kusuma WardaniNiken Kusuma Wardani (6/15/2009 1:16:00 AM)

    Hi, it's indeed true, we don't need anything to be happy... because happiness is about feeling not about something :) great work!

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  • Victor Gama Sabbithi (6/15/2009 12:51:00 AM)

    Very beautiful, As I read - I can see. and feel.

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  • Rafique Farooqi (6/14/2009 11:44:00 PM)

    happiness is always with feelings of heart and mind ''''


    beautifull

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  • Vibhu AshokVibhu Ashok (6/14/2009 10:39:00 PM)

    Vert True, Love is like that only, if it can be bought through anything else then, it is no love at all, Love is just Love

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  • Zeinab Sherif (6/14/2009 1:10:00 PM)

    And this is the eye of love.i'm happy that there is someone who understand the real meaning of love.

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  • sky dreams (6/14/2009 7:51:00 AM)

    this is truly a beautiful poem.. it reminds me of the movie tristan and isolde.. im usually not one for love poems but this really is an amazing poem.

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  • Ashley Hall (6/14/2009 1:19:00 AM)

    I love it. It's true and it feels so straight from the heart. It makes you think about what love really is. Beautiful.

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  • Rose MaryB. (6/14/2009 12:32:00 AM)

    That is so true. I liked it alot.

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