perhaps tonight is the end of dreams
end the lies of your perception
perhaps tomorrow starts a new story
passionately cared...regardless of theory...
end absolutely the sweet moments
from the love that captures our hearts
pulled from the wreckage of salvation
bring us back the times of life...
who will rescue the lonely heart
and cure the painful part?
who will come to take the risk
to comfort the fading hope? ...
space and time is always another show
precious moments live once more
no one comes... nothing is changed
lonely heart sleeps as is...
soft breeze touches my skin
kills every moment of sensation
bury the love upon my dreams
to a place of no return...
well written lady it's a great poem 10+++
very touching....well written.....10+++ Merna
beautiful poem, sad tender and sweet combined, straight 10++ from me... i love it
The voice questions when she could have a love life again, the love she had is lost-she feels the loss badly and hopes for it to end, but for how long. Finally, her hope is becoming a reality-a beautiful journey it does make.
great poem i like the words thanks a lot
Reminds me of what I am going though now! Took me on a beautiful journey once again! ! 8D
Great poem Lady Grace! ! I love your choice of words. =)
'who will rescue the lonely heart and cure the painful part? who will come to take the risk to comfort the fading hope? '... Nicely put, words that resonate strongly the pain of putting the pieces back together in one's life. Lovely style.
An interesting poem. I enjoyed it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.I would like to translate this poem
dreams end with night, and it is difficult to remain on dreams, life demands practical love, and face realities, , , , , , Grace it is wonderful poem 10+