A Beautiful Journey Poem by lady grace

A Beautiful Journey

Rating: 4.7


perhaps tonight is the end of dreams
end the lies of your perception
perhaps tomorrow starts a new story
passionately cared...regardless of theory...

end absolutely the sweet moments
from the love that captures our hearts
pulled from the wreckage of salvation
bring us back the times of life...

who will rescue the lonely heart
and cure the painful part?
who will come to take the risk
to comfort the fading hope? ...

space and time is always another show
precious moments live once more
no one comes... nothing is changed
lonely heart sleeps as is...

soft breeze touches my skin
kills every moment of sensation
bury the love upon my dreams
to a place of no return...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rafique Farooqi 25 June 2009

dreams end with night, and it is difficult to remain on dreams, life demands practical love, and face realities, , , , , , Grace it is wonderful poem 10+

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Angelica Ayman 25 June 2009

well written lady it's a great poem 10+++

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Merna Ibrahim 23 June 2009

very touching....well written.....10+++ Merna

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Seth Mutau 17 September 2009

beautiful poem, sad tender and sweet combined, straight 10++ from me... i love it

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Obinna Eruchie 07 September 2009

The voice questions when she could have a love life again, the love she had is lost-she feels the loss badly and hopes for it to end, but for how long. Finally, her hope is becoming a reality-a beautiful journey it does make.

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Akram Awadat 19 July 2010

great poem i like the words thanks a lot

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Warren Zukina III 31 December 2009

Reminds me of what I am going though now! Took me on a beautiful journey once again! ! 8D

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Melanie Johnson 03 December 2009

Great poem Lady Grace! ! I love your choice of words. =)

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fleur de lys 30 November 2009

'who will rescue the lonely heart and cure the painful part? who will come to take the risk to comfort the fading hope? '... Nicely put, words that resonate strongly the pain of putting the pieces back together in one's life. Lovely style.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 11 October 2009

An interesting poem. I enjoyed it.

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