A Beautiful Journey Poem by lady grace

A Beautiful Journey

Rating: 4.7


perhaps tonight is the end of dreams
end the lies of your perception
perhaps tomorrow starts a new story
passionately cared...regardless of theory...

end absolutely the sweet moments
from the love that captures our hearts
pulled from the wreckage of salvation
bring us back the times of life...

who will rescue the lonely heart
and cure the painful part?
who will come to take the risk
to comfort the fading hope? ...

space and time is always another show
precious moments live once more
no one comes... nothing is changed
lonely heart sleeps as is...

soft breeze touches my skin
kills every moment of sensation
bury the love upon my dreams
to a place of no return...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juneil Sechico 27 June 2009

nice dream of a beauteous journey....well penned!

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i was carried away of your dream...wonderful each word, each line very creative..thanks best regads, jdh

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Catrina Heart 01 July 2009

Just so lovely LG..........

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Hazem Al Jaber 02 July 2009

got me stun with your lovely sweet words.. keep on dear sweet poet.. hazem al..

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Sanjib Das 04 July 2009

Like P. B. Shelley, You dream something new-new from all sides-sides from resurrection-the resurrection of Jesus Christ. You prove that you genius and I appreciate your poetic quality.

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Akram Awadat 19 July 2010

great poem i like the words thanks a lot

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Warren Zukina III 31 December 2009

Reminds me of what I am going though now! Took me on a beautiful journey once again! ! 8D

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Melanie Johnson 03 December 2009

Great poem Lady Grace! ! I love your choice of words. =)

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fleur de lys 30 November 2009

'who will rescue the lonely heart and cure the painful part? who will come to take the risk to comfort the fading hope? '... Nicely put, words that resonate strongly the pain of putting the pieces back together in one's life. Lovely style.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 11 October 2009

An interesting poem. I enjoyed it.

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