lady grace

A Beautiful Journey

perhaps tonight is the end of dreams
end the lies of your perception
perhaps tomorrow starts a new story
passionately cared...regardless of theory...

end absolutely the sweet moments
from the love that captures our hearts
pulled from the wreckage of salvation
bring us back the times of life...

who will rescue the lonely heart
and cure the painful part?
who will come to take the risk
to comfort the fading hope? ...

space and time is always another show
precious moments live once more
no one comes... nothing is changed
lonely heart sleeps as is...

soft breeze touches my skin
kills every moment of sensation
bury the love upon my dreams
to a place of no return...

Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 20, 2009
Poem Edited: Friday, July 3, 2009

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  • Akram Awadat (7/19/2010 1:48:00 AM)

    great poem
    i like the words
    thanks a lot

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  • Warren Zukina III (12/31/2009 7:24:00 PM)

    Reminds me of what I am going though now! Took me on a beautiful journey once again! ! 8D

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  • Melanie Johnson (12/3/2009 6:33:00 PM)

    Great poem Lady Grace! ! I love your choice of words. =)

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  • fleur de lys (11/30/2009 10:49:00 AM)

    'who will rescue the lonely heart
    and cure the painful part?
    who will come to take the risk
    to comfort the fading hope? '...

    Nicely put, words that resonate strongly the pain of putting the pieces back together in one's life. Lovely style.

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  • Chris G. VaillancourtChris G. Vaillancourt (10/11/2009 5:42:00 AM)

    An interesting poem. I enjoyed it.

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  • Sherri Coulter (9/21/2009 4:12:00 PM)

    rescuing role/roll in future not available -even when pleading-My New Golden Rule

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  • Seth Mutau (9/17/2009 3:38:00 AM)

    beautiful poem, sad tender and sweet combined, straight 10++ from me... i love it

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  • Obinna Eruchie (9/7/2009 6:55:00 AM)

    The voice questions when she could have a love life again, the love she had is lost-she feels the loss badly and hopes for it to end, but for how long. Finally, her hope is becoming a reality-a beautiful journey it does make.

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  • Myrtle ThomasMyrtle Thomas (7/7/2009 4:55:00 PM)

    Oh such a sweet tender feeling in this poem, I can't even think of a sentence or stanza that I like the best, they are all tender and sweet. LOVED THIS a 10

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  • Dr.subhendu KarDr.subhendu Kar (7/5/2009 12:04:00 AM)

    soft breeze touches my skin
    kills every moment of sensation
    bury the love upon my dreams
    to a place of no return.............................

    wonder of love awes by grace
    heart resurrects by resilience...
    heart cries to latch on tunes
    yet sensation croon on the shadow of dream.....superbly yet it paints the art of love as when curved upon the skin of color, most ingenious flow of passion by imagery,10++++++, thanks for sharing

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  • Sanjib Das (7/4/2009 7:50:00 AM)

    Like P. B. Shelley, You dream something new-new from all sides-sides from resurrection-the resurrection of Jesus Christ. You prove that you genius and I appreciate your poetic quality.

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  • Hazem Al JaberHazem Al Jaber (7/2/2009 12:43:00 AM)

    got me stun with your lovely sweet words..
    keep on dear sweet poet..
    hazem al..

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  • Catrina Heart (7/1/2009 1:03:00 AM)

    Just so lovely LG..........

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  • Jazlle Hugo **contentment is the key to happiness (6/28/2009 1:15:00 AM)

    i was carried away of your dream...wonderful each word, each line very creative..thanks

    best regads,
    jdh

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  • Juneil Sechico (6/27/2009 6:54:00 AM)

    nice dream of a beauteous journey....well penned!

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  • Geovanni Leaño (6/26/2009 6:02:00 PM)

    i adore the last stanza ^_^ keep it up! hehe...
    hopefully you'll have a wonderful journey, butalways keep in mind that we make our own life's journey. ^_^

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  • The Dreamer (6/26/2009 5:12:00 AM)

    My Dear Lady Grace

    soft breeze touches my skin, kills every moment of sensation 'removing the love'
    For me it should be
    soft breeze touches my skin like your warm heart a true moment of sensation ;)

    Very Nice.

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  • Rafique Farooqi (6/25/2009 11:47:00 PM)

    dreams end with night, and it is difficult to remain on dreams, life demands practical love, and face realities, , , , , , Grace it is wonderful poem 10+

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  • Angelica Ayman (6/25/2009 7:51:00 AM)

    well written lady it's a great poem 10+++

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  • Merna Ibrahim (6/23/2009 7:17:00 AM)

    very touching....well written.....10+++
    Merna

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