Departure Poem by lady grace


Rating: 4.7

a love like ours sparks and glares
like the stars cling in the sky
like the moon way up there
spread its daring dazzling light...

a love like ours will never end
it flows in the river of nile
like kisses the shore
sleeps in the ocean for a while..

the love of my life is only you
no other man owned my heart
together we long for a blessing
together we build a simple stride...

in your solitude i was always there
i came even in the middle of the night
your hugs warmth my day
as you turned off all the lights...

strong winds wipe the tears
silence hide the claws of death
as we walk the aisle of love
take a vow from judgemental eyes...

the tender kisses that we had
bring tears to our eyes
no marks of uncontentment
in our hearts full of sacrifice

as i say these words again and again
our love will stay until the next page of our life
it always be as same as yesterday
the love like a sun giving light...

as i glance the last march of your journey
it kills every strands of my life
''truths..lies and all come what may''
will only live in your wife...

Cynthia Correa 29 June 2009

This was a gud poem i like how u used alot of details and expressed ur self well Ur a much better writer than i am

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Descriptive and beautiful writing Grace. It all flows smoothly and I hope it will for the rest of your life. Karin Anderson

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Kristina B; Williams 24 June 2009

this is 1 of my favorite poems ive read since being on this site, and ive read some great giving you a 10 n adding it to my favorites, lovely job.sorry it takes me a while to write back, not ignoring you, but ive got acl luekemnia, and for the past 3 days had chemo. ive just wrote 2 new short poems, in the middle, and fighting times.please read n comment n vote.need all the advice n readers n poem friends, that are in tune with thier poetry just as yourself

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Vidi Writes 21 June 2009

They say an Arrival is better than a Departure. Here in this poem Departure takes a prime post. Here you have your best feel of Departure Even that memory inspired you to write so magnificently You have put the Love at its best place Even at the juncture of Departure. Great read here. Enjoyed the feel Thank you

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Hamd Ejaz 19 June 2009

great writing! it highlites the bright nature of the Extra-terrestial phenomena v all call LOVE. nice!

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 14 September 2009

this is a veryyyyy lovelyyyyyy poem.. i love it.. so true love flowing like river.. i can feel the truth behind words and am really very sure that you have written it with great feel and from deep down your heart

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Obinna Eruchie 07 September 2009

Your times wonderful with him has departed with his death, but your love never ending for him lives in your heart. A tender poem.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 August 2009

''truths..lies and all come what may'' will only live in memory to your wife... yes truth is always biiter andnot easy to forget tooo. it remains inour memory for a long.very good piece of poetry......10 read mine old memory lane.. innocence regained..never say die....

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Jasper Pane 27 July 2009

You my dear lady have painted a portrait of 'parting is such sweet sorrow.: So it is the portrait you have painted and the words you have spoken will live in the hearts and minds of those that read them. A great piece. Truly!

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Fernando Lachica 05 July 2009

You have talent in poetry, madam! I like this piece, very soothing when reading this poem. Great!

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