lady grace

Departure

a love like ours sparks and glares
like the stars cling in the sky
like the moon way up there
spread its daring dazzling light...

a love like ours will never end
it flows in the river of nile
like waves..it kisses the shore
sleeps in the ocean for a while..

the love of my life is only you
no other man owned my heart
together we long for a blessing
together we build a simple stride...

in your solitude i was always there
i came even in the middle of the night
your hugs warmth my day
as you turned off all the lights...

strong winds wipe the tears
silence hide the claws of death
as we walk the aisle of love
take a vow from judgemental eyes...

the tender kisses that we had
bring tears to our eyes
no marks of uncontentment
in our hearts full of sacrifice

as i say these words again and again
our love will stay until the next page of our life
it always be as same as yesterday
the love like a sun giving light...

as i glance the last march of your journey
it kills every strands of my life
''truths..lies and all come what may''
will only live in memory...as your wife...

Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 13, 2009
Poem Edited: Tuesday, May 31, 2011

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  • Shalini Sundararamalingam (9/14/2009 12:08:00 AM)

    this is a veryyyyy lovelyyyyyy poem.. i love it.. so true love flowing like river.. i can feel the truth behind words and am really very sure that you have written it with great feel and from deep down your heart

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  • Obinna Eruchie (9/7/2009 6:57:00 AM)

    Your times wonderful with him has departed with his death, but your love never ending for him lives in your heart. A tender poem.

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  • Mehta Hasmukh AmathalalMehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/17/2009 11:00:00 PM)

    ''truths..lies and all come what may''
    will only live in memory to me...as your wife...
    yes truth is always biiter andnot easy to forget tooo. it remains inour memory for a long.very good piece of poetry......10

    read mine old memory lane.. innocence regained..never say die....

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  • Jasper Pane (7/27/2009 5:53:00 PM)

    You my dear lady have painted a portrait of
    'parting is such sweet sorrow.:

    So it is the portrait you have painted and
    the words you have spoken will live
    in the hearts and minds of those
    that read them.

    A great piece. Truly!

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  • Fernando Lachica (7/5/2009 11:08:00 AM)

    You have talent in poetry, madam! I like this piece, very soothing when reading this poem. Great!

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  • Cynthia Correa (6/29/2009 5:41:00 PM)

    This was a gud poem i like how u used alot of details and expressed ur self well
    Ur a much better writer than i am

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  • Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (6/25/2009 3:33:00 AM)

    Descriptive and beautiful writing Grace. It all flows smoothly and I hope it will for the rest of your life. Karin Anderson

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  • Kristina B; Williams (6/24/2009 11:03:00 PM)

    this is 1 of my favorite poems ive read since being on this site, and ive read some great ones.im giving you a 10 n adding it to my favorites, lovely job.sorry it takes me a while to write back, not ignoring you, but ive got acl luekemnia, and for the past 3 days had chemo. ive just wrote 2 new short poems, in the middle, and fighting times.please read n comment n vote.need all the advice n readers n poem friends, that are in tune with thier poetry just as yourself

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  • Vidi WritesVidi Writes (6/21/2009 8:23:00 AM)

    They say an Arrival is better than a Departure.
    Here in this poem Departure takes a prime post.
    Here you have your best feel of Departure
    Even that memory inspired you to write so magnificently
    You have put the Love at its best place
    Even at the juncture of Departure.

    Great read here. Enjoyed the feel
    Thank you

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  • Hamd Ejaz (6/19/2009 9:14:00 AM)

    great writing! it highlites the bright nature of the Extra-terrestial phenomena v all call LOVE. nice!

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  • Deedee ceecee (6/18/2009 6:10:00 PM)

    Very romantic and beautiful with alot of emotions and feelings..it's really cute and sweet..I really hope you and the person you love will be very happy...if you can put that much feeling into a poem for him, he must feel really special

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  • Kristina B; Williams (6/17/2009 7:08:00 PM)

    read your poem departure, it kept me n my sese of being in pure enrapture.absolutlety beautiful..excellent way of writing and expressions...10s
    i got 3 new 1s, short n sweet.so if you can be so kind and find the time, i trully would appreciate it..mine r, perfect, im not supposed too, and sometimes i wonde

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  • Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty (6/17/2009 1:10:00 PM)

    'our love will stay until the next page of our life'......
    Nice .....why not endless pages of our life....? ..... as love is ever flowing ...
    .... a nimble journey to .....Eternity..
    ... finally ILYP [I Love Your Poetry]...
    a 10++
    dr. sakti
    17.06.09.

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  • Aijaz Asif (6/17/2009 2:01:00 AM)

    wow, that one is different from the one you wrote earlier and still you are very good in creating master pieces and you did it again with writing this master piece with so much love floating in the lines, thanks for sharing...many 10'ssss humbly from me

    rgds
    asif

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  • Muhammad Ali (6/17/2009 1:28:00 AM)

    love is beautiful
    love is hhonest
    love is simple..........! !
    and so this poem is.... lovely! !
    10..

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  • Sandra Van Coppenhagen (6/16/2009 4:14:00 PM)

    wow, that is truly beautiful..... i can't imagine loving some one so much.
    it makes you believe that love is worth the pain that comes with it.

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  • Rm. Shanmugam ChettiarRm. Shanmugam Chettiar (6/16/2009 5:38:00 AM)

    a touching love poem neatly written 10 shan

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  • Noel Horlanda (6/16/2009 2:43:00 AM)

    beautifully composed but I didn't see who left, I mean who depart. Your lover I suppose? Lines flows freely as if cascading waters or rushing flood in an overflowing river. Wonderful! Thanks

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  • Ch J Satyananda Kumar (6/16/2009 1:08:00 AM)

    The poem is flowing like a river of rainy season!

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  • Sally Plumb Plumb (6/16/2009 1:05:00 AM)

    A very agreeable piece of writing.

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