To cultivate a barren time
To create a rose garden
You entered into an unknown time
We walk together
And we talked about
Birds flower
The river flowing from the moon.
We embraced each other
Slowly during a timelessness
The barren time turns into
A rose garden.
Love is so creative. I love the first line of your poem 'To cultivate a barren time' Thanks.9 for this piece.
A lovely poem.............10++++ Thanks for your nice comments on my poem Who Am I?
Love like rose trees needs constant attention to produce a beautiful flowering
rose garden - a good metaphor for any relationship and it takes time to develop such a relationship like a river flowing. I like the way you phrase it: “The river flowing from the moon” which is very suggestive of so many things.
To cultivate a barren time To create a rose garden You entered into an unknown time, , , very simple and beautiful write indeed.... Dream ah! dream don't know what to say or to give to one of the great poet....a geniuses write rgds balouch
We embraced each other Slowly during a timelessness The barren time turns into A rose garden. ..wonderful concept.....
togetherness brings life and nurtures a garden of colorful moments
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
i loved the romantic setting of the poem u are really good at imagery stuff.great work.