A Barren Time Poem by Ershad Mazumder

Ershad Mazumder

Ershad Mazumder

House 1, Road 23B, Gulshan 1, Dhaka 1212, Bangladesh(Now live in Dhaka permanently.)
Ershad Mazumder
House 1, Road 23B, Gulshan 1, Dhaka 1212, Bangladesh(Now live in Dhaka permanently.)

A Barren Time

Rating: 5.0


To cultivate a barren time
To create a rose garden
You entered into an unknown time
We walk together
And we talked about
Birds flower
The river flowing from the moon.

We embraced each other
Slowly during a timelessness
The barren time turns into
A rose garden.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue Eyes 12 October 2008

i loved the romantic setting of the poem u are really good at imagery stuff.great work.

0 0 Reply
Asif Andalib 29 September 2008

Love is so creative. I love the first line of your poem 'To cultivate a barren time' Thanks.9 for this piece.

0 0 Reply
Gargi Saha 24 September 2008

A lovely poem.............10++++ Thanks for your nice comments on my poem Who Am I?

0 0 Reply
Ivor Hogg 12 September 2008

Love like rose trees needs constant attention to produce a beautiful flowering

0 0 Reply
Ben Gieske 10 September 2008

rose garden - a good metaphor for any relationship and it takes time to develop such a relationship like a river flowing. I like the way you phrase it: “The river flowing from the moon” which is very suggestive of so many things.

0 0 Reply
Ralph The Elf 05 July 2012

wow.i guess the time was not barren after all...very beautiful

0 0 Reply
Aijaz Asif 25 January 2012

To cultivate a barren time To create a rose garden You entered into an unknown time, , , very simple and beautiful write indeed.... Dream ah! dream don't know what to say or to give to one of the great poet....a geniuses write rgds balouch

0 0 Reply
Riyaz Gupta 19 January 2010

We embraced each other Slowly during a timelessness The barren time turns into A rose garden. ..wonderful concept.....

0 0 Reply
Lady Grace 29 May 2009

when you are inlove, you are inspired..grace

0 0 Reply
Chitra - 17 October 2008

togetherness brings life and nurtures a garden of colorful moments

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Ershad Mazumder

Ershad Mazumder

House 1, Road 23B, Gulshan 1, Dhaka 1212, Bangladesh(Now live in Dhaka permanently.)
Ershad Mazumder
House 1, Road 23B, Gulshan 1, Dhaka 1212, Bangladesh(Now live in Dhaka permanently.)
Close
Error Success