Edward Kofi Louis

Gold Star - 308,454 Points (13th October 1961 / Accra, GHANA)

A Better Tomorrow - Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

A garden of thorns and thistles,
Someone had ceceicved you my love;
And flying up high like an eagle to view the world,
But someone had stolen your love away from me.
I can't trust anyone again in this land of hatred,
For you came and ate from my tree of love;
And now you are very worried!
But there will be a better tomorrow for me.

Comments about A Better Tomorrow by Edward Kofi Louis

  • Warden Vukeya (11/8/2016 3:35:00 AM)

    good poem
    Nice work in here, everybody needs a better tomorrow (Report) Reply

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  • Yolandey Share (9/29/2016 3:49:00 AM)

    You know Edward its strange how people don't really understand the hurt that you go through
    When loving someone you can't love you back no matter what you try to do I might have this poem
    Miss read but its nicely said if only you know if only
    (Report) Reply

  • Rose Kanana (9/10/2016 10:56:00 AM)

    coexisting is good, makes the world a better place. Thanks for the highlight of both sides of the coin (Report) Reply

  • Tango (5/22/2016 2:38:00 PM)

    So very, very true. If only we could learn to live with each other, and accept each other for what we are.
    The world would be a wonderful place.
    (Report) Reply

  • Paul Butters (3/18/2016 5:46:00 PM)

    Great thoughts Edward. If Only....... It's so simple yet... (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder (2/23/2016 4:35:00 PM)

    Wow! If everyone had this mindset, the entire world would be a better place to live. Wonderful piece of writing. (Report) Reply

  • Mysia Hayling (1/18/2016 10:05:00 AM)

    simple but i wish it had more lines but was short and to the point. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (10/2/2015 6:37:00 AM)

    Every betrayal has repentance. Tomorrow always comes with brightest future and positivity. Poignant write. (Report) Reply

  • Jr Cuyam (9/28/2015 3:15:00 AM)

    Nicely penned and awesome depiction of moving on in life (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (8/16/2015 6:32:00 AM)

    A lovely devotional poem................................... (Report) Reply

  • Melvina Germain (8/15/2015 6:51:00 PM)

    Praise God we can move forward with God's strength and love. Many can relate from these words Edward...Excellent poem..... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 9, 2010

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