Kranthi Pothineni

A Bird’s Tragic Love Story - Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

A bird is flying amply in woods.
A bird is singing gaily in woods.
A bird is living happily in woods.
Those are gleeful days of a bird.

Flying amply it falls in pure love.
Singing gaily it gabs to its love.
Living happily it deems it got love.
These are cuddly days of a bird.

Pure love doubts on it’s amply fall.
Pure love giggles on it’s gaily gabs.
Pure love blames on its happy deems.
This is that woeful day of a bird.

It rested awfully with appal in love.
It cried badly with pain in love.
It lived sadly with hope in love.
These are painful days of a bird.

Its awful rest in love is faded.
Its painful cry in love is lost.
Its mad hope in love is ebbed.
These are mending days of a bird.

After that it never flied amply.
After that it never singed gaily.
After that it never lived happily.
After that it never loved again.

This is a bird’s tragic love story.

Comments about A Bird’s Tragic Love Story by Kranthi Pothineni

  • (5/12/2014 10:03:00 AM)

    Though birds they are the most loved ones and poem is also good. (Report) Reply

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  • Malaya Roses (7/26/2011 9:08:00 AM)

    Love could build the thickest wall and could cause more damage than we presume but without love, we could never understand what is it mean to be happy and sad..! ! !
    Fair opinion about love and affliction.
    Well done! ! !
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  • (7/4/2010 3:32:00 AM)

    It seems amazing, that love which everyone yearns for so much could destroy people at the same time.

    ' it never never lived happily'. awesome i say.
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  • (6/29/2010 8:20:00 PM)

    I absolutely love what the repetition does to this poem.10/10 (Report) Reply

  • (12/27/2009 1:32:00 PM)

    that's a stunning poem i liked how it began and ended up.............that's wonderful! (Report) Reply

  • (12/18/2009 5:26:00 PM)

    'Tis better to have love and lost, than not to have loved at all. Great poem. (Report) Reply

  • (10/28/2009 9:43:00 AM)

    'These are mending days of a bird'

    Rachel Ann Butler
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  • Indira Renganathan (7/10/2009 5:02:00 AM)

    Legacy and fall of a bird's love story....well done 10+++ (Report) Reply

  • (6/19/2009 8:51:00 AM)

    ''Pure love doubts on it’s amply fall.
    Pure love giggles on it’s gaily gabs.
    Pure love blames on its happy deems.''
    a wonderful definition of love.....10++
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  • (5/23/2009 12:10:00 AM)

    very tragic story indeed..simple, but very creative.... very nice narrative poem indeed..enjoyed it very much..thanks 10++ for the entertainment (Report) Reply

  • (5/12/2009 4:16:00 AM)

    wonderfull imagination.nice poem.posted 10 for u
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  • (4/26/2009 1:47:00 AM)

    a bird's love takes wing...gets tired loses flight...looks sad..good narration, Kranthi...ten for you. (Report) Reply

  • (3/8/2009 4:49:00 PM)

    good poem.
    imagry is verry nice in this poem.
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  • (1/1/2009 10:16:00 PM)

    Truly tragic story
    but magic of love never fails..................
    Good write.............
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 21, 2008

Poem Edited: Friday, July 29, 2011

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