A Bird’s Tragic Love Story Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

A Bird’s Tragic Love Story

Rating: 5.0

A bird is flying amply in woods.
A bird is singing gaily in woods.
A bird is living happily in woods.
Those are gleeful days of a bird.

Flying amply it falls in pure love.
Singing gaily it gabs to its love.
Living happily it deems it got love.
These are cuddly days of a bird.

Pure love doubts on it’s amply fall.
Pure love giggles on it’s gaily gabs.
Pure love blames on its happy deems.
This is that woeful day of a bird.

It rested awfully with appal in love.
It cried badly with pain in love.
It lived sadly with hope in love.
These are painful days of a bird.

Its awful rest in love is faded.
Its painful cry in love is lost.
Its mad hope in love is ebbed.
These are mending days of a bird.

After that it never flied amply.
After that it never singed gaily.
After that it never lived happily.
After that it never loved again.

This is a bird’s tragic love story.

Walterrean Salley 18 December 2009

'Tis better to have love and lost, than not to have loved at all. Great poem.

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Omar Ibrahim 27 December 2009

that's a stunning poem i liked how it began and ended up.............that's wonderful!

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 01 January 2009

Truly tragic story but magic of love never fails.................. Good write.............

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Stephanie Souter 08 March 2009

good poem. imagry is verry nice in this poem. 8.5

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Kesav Easwaran 26 April 2009

a bird's love takes wing...gets tired loses flight...looks sad..good narration, Kranthi...ten for you.

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nailah 04 May 2018

amazing this is wonderful

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Though birds they are the most loved ones and poem is also good.

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Malaya Roses 26 July 2011

Love could build the thickest wall and could cause more damage than we presume but without love, we could never understand what is it mean to be happy and sad..! ! ! Fair opinion about love and affliction. Well done! ! !

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UnKnown Messenger 04 July 2010

It seems amazing, that love which everyone yearns for so much could destroy people at the same time. ' it never flied...it never lived happily'. awesome i say.

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Stephanie Souter 29 June 2010

I absolutely love what the repetition does to this poem.10/10

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