I got lost in crowd
Lost my way to home
Where my smile smiled
My heart learned tango
Under the tree of mango
They pushed my back
Rubbed shoulders hard
Made me dance to tunes
Of their own wishful wish
They fished me like a fish
I walked on forced path
It took me far from home
Into land of living in fast
Where hearts change fast
While lying on their past
I tried learning its rules
Only to learn I am a fool
When it comes to games
Where rules change quick
With in each seconds click
Now I swim by the push
In a small pond like fish
Wondering on any wish
My heart wishes to make
Which will not be a fake
a true indian situation this...you become a fish in a family pond dance to tunes of others...without whole heartedly getting involved...a rare subject
Lost in the crowd, but found the way out at the end. Good.
follow your heart and you will see, just like a fish, it wants to be free. good write, and a point to ponder. a ten
Nice symbolistic poem. I remark with delight that you have a very suggestive technique by which you express your feelings.Thank you for sharing......10++++++++
Well, one can be easily lost in the beauty of your rhymes.
very nice lines indeed.. I loved your rhymes.. Very fresh., ... with lots of 'sh's'.. nice 10++ regards Shan
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I would like to translate this poem
No good being a big fish in a small pond.