Lost Poem by Kranthi Pothineni


Rating: 5.0

I got lost in crowd
Lost my way to home
Where my smile smiled
My heart learned tango
Under the tree of mango

They pushed my back
Rubbed shoulders hard
Made me dance to tunes
Of their own wishful wish
They fished me like a fish

I walked on forced path
It took me far from home
Into land of living in fast
Where hearts change fast
While lying on their past

I tried learning its rules
Only to learn I am a fool
When it comes to games
Where rules change quick
With in each seconds click

Now I swim by the push
In a small pond like fish
Wondering on any wish
My heart wishes to make
Which will not be a fake

Joseph Poewhit 03 October 2009

No good being a big fish in a small pond.

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 03 October 2009

a true indian situation this...you become a fish in a family pond dance to tunes of others...without whole heartedly getting involved...a rare subject

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Rajaram Ramachandran 03 October 2009

Lost in the crowd, but found the way out at the end. Good.

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Louis Rams 03 October 2009

follow your heart and you will see, just like a fish, it wants to be free. good write, and a point to ponder. a ten

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Eyan Desir 04 October 2009

Good write Kranthi 10s

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Kareem Hany 02 December 2009

i like this one a lot

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Marieta Maglas 07 October 2009

Nice symbolistic poem. I remark with delight that you have a very suggestive technique by which you express your feelings.Thank you for sharing......10++++++++

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 07 October 2009

Well, one can be easily lost in the beauty of your rhymes.

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Shashendra Amalshan 06 October 2009

very nice lines indeed.. I loved your rhymes.. Very fresh., ... with lots of 'sh's'.. nice 10++ regards Shan

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Catrina Heart 05 October 2009

fabulous interesting piece...nice rhymes too....

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