Die To Live Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

wow! ! ! ! ! Keep fighting, and never quite trying

splendid splendid poem..

This poem tells A interstin stroy Fun and interestin good write

This is a very well expressed poem, Kranthi, but there are some minor mistakes in it that need attention. In your second verse, the word 'frighted' should be frightened. In verse four, 'lone' should be loneliness and after for in line three, you should say 'my perishing image.' In verse five, 'loss' in the first line should be 'lose.' In the final one line verse, you need a space between 'at' and 'least.' Overall, as I said, this is a very expressive and well thought out poem, with short, crisp lines and a very cohesive plan throughout the poem. I liked it. Carl.

Intriguing back and forth use of your words, Kranthi..........................

Stand for something or you will fall for anything. We must take a stand when it comes to some things in life. A heroic poe. Thank you.

‘…I will fight the tyrant // And will die with honor…’ Staunch Faith in oneself is better than weak faith on God…, And your tyrant will go into oblivion…and you'll be immortal thro' death Ms. Nivedita Ten UK

heroic words! I love it. keep writing!

'Gorantha deepam kondantha velugu chigurantha aasa jagamantha velugu' Your poem reminds me tha great song from Bapu's movie by Arudra. Yes! When noone to come to support u, you are very well there to support yourself. Well written poem

HERO'S often fail at things but bring the silver lining from the cloud