I am living with smile
Along with lot of bail
And like a small child
In a world of care
With my old birth pair
Its my home for age
I played in that cage
With a lot of gage
Also made me a sage
So its not just a page
It gave me a name
It showed me a aim
Also thought me a game
That made me a dame
Then my marriage came
And gave me new name
Showed me a new aim
Changed the rules of game
Life is no longer same
My past life looks tame
New life act like a sage
My old life is not page
Don't tear it with rage
Read it carefully for age
Its a wish of a bride
verry verry nicely corected. i like this poem so much more. wonderful job
Kranthi ur lines are melodious wth ryhmes..and I love the mention of the sage. cheers. The Sage
wish all your aims will come true....well expressed indeed..i like the flow of your words..very moving 10++
starting a dual life...transition to the latter stage will happen only slowly...meaningful write, Kranthi...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A bride always wish for a happy and healthy life...past is a past and we are there to live anew with your lucky bride....10+++++++