! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Bite Fright- Senryu! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! A Bite Fright- Senryu! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Rating: 5.0


Chill goes down my spine
As I bite an apple with skin;
Doctor on his way…

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vidi Writes 13 December 2009

Inspite of the bite of Preventive apple... Doctor on his way... Something fun Something serious too.... Fright of a bite...! ! ! Good one. Enjoyed the read. Still a query.... How are you dear poet?

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Ranjit Ravindran 29 November 2009

It feels nice when I find out that people still dare to bite deep into an apple rather than slicing them into pieces and consuming. Enjoy your apple & have a great time.

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Catrina Heart 29 November 2009

An apple a day keeps the doctor away! ! ! though dentist may come since we have this sensitive molar.......nice senryu done! ! ! 10+++

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Kesav Easwaran 29 November 2009

a Dentist could be on his way! nice humorous piece Mamta...a genuine senryu...10

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