Chill goes down my spine
As I bite an apple with skin;
Doctor on his way…
It feels nice when I find out that people still dare to bite deep into an apple rather than slicing them into pieces and consuming. Enjoy your apple & have a great time.
An apple a day keeps the doctor away! ! ! though dentist may come since we have this sensitive molar.......nice senryu done! ! ! 10+++
a Dentist could be on his way! nice humorous piece Mamta...a genuine senryu...10
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Inspite of the bite of Preventive apple... Doctor on his way... Something fun Something serious too.... Fright of a bite...! ! ! Good one. Enjoyed the read. Still a query.... How are you dear poet?