Such a bitter kiss
Bestowed by thy lips
I lay upon the ground
A fight so unimaginable
Such sweeping blows
To cut through my heart
I weep at such failure
To fool myself once more
I shall never triumph
Over such a love
Powerful display of emotions, my friend. Congrats' on having this poem voted as 'poem of the day'. I am so proud of you. Stay blessed!
I love this so much! Short yet hard hitting. Simply wonderful.
I love this poem I get the message your sending and I can feel the sorrow with each word I read it's a lovely poem you've got great talent
Interesting and surprising, takes one aback. Read mine Who Am I Adeline
First love, first betrayal, a story told before and told again, and yours aspires with the good, so long since I read one of yours, still a nice experience.
I read it... it felt like a concrete blow... harsh and over-emotional... thanks for sharing
Emotions well expressed. Congratulations dear poet for it being 'poem of the day;
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
To be fooled by a kiss Knowing much lies ahead Is to give life a total miss And live dull and morose as lead........ Very good write and I welcome you to my page too