A Boy Ruminated Poem by Doris Cornago

A Boy Ruminated

Rating: 5.0


Once
A boy
Ruminated
Visiting far
Mystic castles
All 600 of them
Scattered in Wales
Ended with a knight
With sweet ladylove
Went up a lovely hill
Feeling silly surreal
Racing up spectacular
Verdant countryside
Gentle mystic moors
KEY's own paradise
No match, no dice
Friendship gained
Lifetime friends
England's best
Wales' crest
Surprising
Packages
Blest

A Boy Ruminated
Tuesday, July 3, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: castle,friends,knights,surprise,surreal
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
What happens in life is different from what we expect most times as the person we meet is different from the person we expect. Expect the unexpected and have fun is the gist of this poem. Here's a thanksgiving poem to Jeremy Rodgers and his lovely wife Emily for providing a warm welcome and surreal company to Mr. KEY on a side trip through South Wales while on a tour of England, post-London Blockchain Summit.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 14 July 2018

the breath of earth is bizarre! Oh! Bleeding water into the veins of meeting! No! nothing is here; just matched up somewhat expected with unexpected gist of life! ................

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Doris Cornago 20 November 2018

Yes. Profound. Thank you. :)

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Captain Cur 14 July 2018

Beautiful poem! A travelers delight about green hills, majestic castles, renowned knights and true and lasting friendships!

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Doris Cornago 20 November 2018

Yes. Indeed. As you are now. Thank you. :)

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Adrian Flett 14 July 2018

Seen through the convex lens of the poem's shape the wonders of travel

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Doris Cornago 20 November 2018

Thank you. It was indeed a failure of the lens. But well-received, anyway. :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 14 July 2018

Such a splendid poem of the day, Doris... congrats for being chosen...10+++

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Lamar Cole 14 July 2018

Congratulations on your poem A Boy Ruminated being selected as Member Poem Of The Day.

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Doris Cornago 20 November 2018

Thank you. It was a conciliatory gift twice rewarded. Amazing. :)

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