A Breath Of Spring Poem by Sylvia Star

A Breath Of Spring

Rating: 4.9


A vision came to me of spring
Across the bright, cold, winter air
of budding trees and birds that sing;
a field of meadow flowers fair
daffodils and cornflowers too,
fresh and bright and kissed with dew.

A fairy land it seemed to me,
and longing then I was for spring
when robins sing in every tree;
having their blithe and cheery fling,
filling the world with a merry sound
while blossoms everywhere abound.

The vision faded, I looked around
and saw the boughs all decked in snow,
a blanket of white upon the ground,
a single bird the only sound.
And then the breeze blew soft and clean
bringing forth a breath of spring.

A Breath Of Spring
Thursday, February 18, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
This Site Is Finished 21 April 2018

It has no credibility as a poetry site. Soon all will leave.

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Lantz Pierre 21 April 2018

Either you're a follower of Donald J. Drumpf and believe that when you say something is so that that makes it so. Or you like eating crow.

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Lantz Pierre 21 April 2018

He made an unsupported statement and would appear to want to let it stand as an indisputable fact. The act of an orange man.

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Look Around 21 April 2018

What do you see a sea of Indians favoured over others with talent. Top 500 poets and poems plus POD. All arbitrary, no guidelines. Allowing trolls to flourish. I ask you what do we think about that? Chasing marks in a Treasure Island Wonderland, getting pathetic comments. This site has no credibility.

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Lantz Pierre 21 April 2018

Correct on almost all points. I wouldn't agree that trolls flourish, but you're proof enough that they are here. And as far as stating, °Soon all will leave.° Just ain't gonna happen.

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Bipasha D 21 April 2018

I loved the rhyme and flow of the poem. Heartiest congratulations.

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 21 April 2018

Spring is just majestically amazing and beautiful.

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Rini Shibu 21 April 2018

Beautiful poem about spring..Congratulations

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Savita Tyagi 21 April 2018

Beautiful poem. Like the fresh breath of spring air. Congratulations and thanks for sharing.

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 April 2018

A beautiful poem with a nice flow. It gives a soothing feeling when spring is around. 'The vision faded, I looked around and saw the boughs all decked in snow, a blanket of white upon the ground, a single bird the only sound. And then the breeze blew soft and clean bringing forth a breath of spring. ' is a beautiful stanza. Thanks.

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