A Butterfly Girl! Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

A Butterfly Girl!

Rating: 5.0


I am a butterfly girl,
With beautiful frills,
Of printed designs,
The body is very thin,
To go into the slim fit,
The tights has the size,
The zebra lines, not to cross,
No changing of colors,
Comfortable with single suit,
The mouth filled with sweets,
The body has the flakes,
Journey through weeks and months,
I am a butterfly girl,
With kind spiky legs,
To walk on the flowers.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sallam Yassin 20 December 2012

let whole world be your flowers field nice poem

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Scotty Dogg 20 December 2012

You got it nailed. Poetry is about images and you get it. Nice job!

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 21 December 2012

Portrayed so graphically that I can see it.10.

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Rajkamal P.j 31 August 2014

This poem is as beautiful as a butterfly. A great write.Congrats Madam

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Rajkamal P.j 31 August 2014

This poem is as beautiful as a butterfly. A great write.Congrats Madam

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Ruby Mostazir 24 December 2013

I love this butterfly girl .... :)

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Rajkamal P.j 23 September 2013

Well done...Fantastic imagination! congrats..

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Chandra Thiagarajan 23 December 2012

Nice personification of the butterfly. The description is resplendent and the poem captures the heart.

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