Sky of morning misty grey
Shrouds of clouds are in the way
Of sunshine's smile i love so much
To lift my waning spirit up.
Picture this, a bright blue sky
A tonic for my tearful eyes
The morning birds of cheerful song
My mood has changed
That emptiness gone.
The weather has a great impact
Upon my feelings, that's a fact
When skies are grey i long for you
To help me face this daytime through.
Jayne Louise Davies
We all seek strength in our lives and embrace it from wherever it may come. Wonderful poem.
I like the way you use the the contrasting weather in the first two stanzas. And then sum it up with the great impact that weather has on your feelings.I really like this poem, Jayne!
So musically and sensitively right and bright. Thank you. Jane and top of the morning to you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
How often we get carried away by the surroundings. I remember a very dear friend of mine, who is a great writer, goes in seclusion to a hilly place and then writes. You succeeded in highlighting your point through this poem.5****