Adam McKim

Rookie - 222 Points (11/12/1984)

A Colorado Girl - Poem by Adam McKim

A Colorado girl captures my eye,
Such a beauty I have come by.
Eyes as blue as the lovely sea,
Hair as blonde as blonde can be.

I wish I knew this Colorado girl,
Who knows what emotions we could unfurl.
If only I could hear her voice,
That alone would make me rejoice.

A Colorado girl too far away,
A distance that leaves me in utter dismay.
If only she could hear my plea,
For love that may forever never be.


Comments about A Colorado Girl by Adam McKim

  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (9/11/2012 3:05:00 AM)


    Well, a nice imagination of a love (also a girl) you spread the feelings in a good way. i really enjoyed reading this art
    Good job.
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  • Tiana Webb (8/21/2012 6:09:00 PM)


    Wow, as usual another great poem. This poem paints a pretty picture of a girl you never could have.
    Amazing and beautiful.
    Tiana xx
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 19, 2012

Poem Edited: Sunday, August 19, 2012


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