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A Commentary

Rating: 2.8
The infantile word 'infantile'
brings up in me a bit of bile.
The other word (he called it boring)
reminds me of him never scoring
in posting something vaguely pleasant
though I enjoy the title 'boy',
I would describe a boy as coy.
But don't forget a boy is young
and not as effortlessly stung
by those who cannot even spell
though try to stand, attempt to sell
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COMMENTS
K K 07 March 2007
How anyone could bore with your writing is a puzzle. Nicely done! KK
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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 05 August 2005
Cool way to put someone out.....So calm and with class.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 05 August 2005
Poetry done the Nehrlich way Never bores when he has something to say. A 'Commentary' he makes to make a point, May leave some 'bent'... And some out of 'joint'! LSP
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Mary Nagy 05 August 2005
I enjoyed this. I think rhyme can be used in many different ways.......snappy come-backs or more serious poetry. Nicely done Herbert. Never change to satisfy the 'popular' opinion. sincerely, mary
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