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A Bird's Eye And Heart View

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I am a roamer, hoping from tree to tree,
Morning to evening, with friends, all glea;
Fruits and nuts at our beaktip, no need to plea,
Rivers and lanes all below, no worries, care free.

I can see men jostling in the streets, buzzling.
Rain or shine, they all, but time not stilling,
Scheming for 'morrow, buying and selling,
Grains, greens, meat, sweets and many hankering.

I can see at this height, a corner, cages with my specie full,
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Allemagne Roßmann 09 September 2012

Its very fine! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i enjoyed it

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Vipins Puthooran 04 January 2012

I relish this poem/ alluring penning/ A wonderful theme/Top marks! !

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Malini Kadir 02 January 2012

a complicated view of the world I say!

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Subbaraman N V 26 July 2011

Absolutely great! A great advocate for birds! Congrats and thanks.

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Gita Ashok 24 March 2011

A great theme penned excellently. It shows the poet's concern for the environment especially birds and also portrays the darker side of us mortals as seen through the eyes of a bird that has been given human values. A very creative piece indeed!

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Jenny Gordon 20 March 2011

Excellent and fascinating, effective metaphor, using the symbolism of a 'bird-eye view' on the eggregious situation of the corrupted world, sinful, depraved, sadistic, vile mankind. Quite the assessment, and seems fairly correct. Lovely presentation. Well done.

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Malaya Roses 17 March 2011

A rhythmic poem and uniform ending for each stanza. The central idea is great with those images and reader could feel the pain of the poor by poverty / less fortunate human did try their best to survive. And finally they have to sacrifice what they love for the basic needs. Well done my friend.

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SOMNATH VERMA 17 March 2011

It is a very nice poem, to the point and really suits the poem.... i don't know much.... This is all i can say.

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Rekha Mandagere 17 March 2011

We visualize different sections of the society in this well knitted poem.The helplessness of people is exposed using great imagery. Nice.RekhaMandagere

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Rekha Mandagere 17 March 2011

We visualize different sections of the society in this well knitted poem.The helplessness of people is exposed using great imagery. Nice.

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