A Conversation With You Poem by Nikunj Sharma

A Conversation With You

Rating: 5.0


You are the breath I take;
You are the brain I rake.
You live afresh in my beat;
Your presence is soul's treat.

You are the mote that;
Dances in the sunbeam,
You are the ray that;
Makes whole world gleam.

You are wave that crashes on rock;
You are force that turns the clock.
You are the sigma of the whole;
You are the derivative;
That shows the goal.

You the sky and the bird;
You are alone yet the herd.
You are the mirror
And the reflection;
You are the action and reaction.

You are the ink that flows in my pen;
You are the fear that lives in den.
You are the sun, the ray and the shine;
You are the real, unreal and divine.

Let me bow my head for once;
Me a heady soul.
You are the mirage I chase
You are my goal……..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roshni D'Souza 17 August 2009

Beautiful words that flow so well down the page...easy on the eyes and ears when read out loud as well. Just replace the abbreviated 'u' and 'ur' out of the first stanza (unless it's there for a reason) and it will be perfect. Thanks, roshni.

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Subroto Chatterjee 11 July 2009

Neat. A moving target, huh? ? Cheers. Subroto

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Deborah Cromer 11 July 2009

Pretty powerful stuff.... Somebody has pull! :) DC

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Susan Aparejo 10 July 2009

I like this poem of yours 10++++. Very nice and hope I am loved the way you describe. Please read my poem and do some advise for me as a new poet. Thanks much

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Secret Shal 10 July 2009

Simply woaw, its really feel like you are talking to ur soul mate. for those who dont believe in soul mate, will even believe in love reading this

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Deborah Cromer 13 November 2009

I have already commented on this, but reading it again, I have to comment again. There is really alot of honor realized here. I love the devotion and recognition you display and give. Very touching with added grace. Good work. Debbie

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Ritty Patnaik 07 September 2009

dear nikunj, it is a beautiful prayer from your heart to the almighty.i have a similar poem called, 'a conversation with god'.sometimes god answers! my best wishes to you. ritty

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Ravi Sathasivam 01 September 2009

You have describe this poem very well. Meaningful images are shown well too Great stuff. Enjoyed reading it

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Rehana Nazli 19 August 2009

Wow! ! You said everything in one go..breath taking! 19th August.09 Rehana Nazli

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Well done Nikunj. You have included meaningful images throughout your thoughtful poem. The last stanza worked beautifully to 'undress' who you was! 10 Karin Anderson

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