*a Cottage By The Lake Poem by Deva De Silva

*a Cottage By The Lake

Rating: 3.6


Away from everyday chaos
Where time flew in a blur
From mundane endeavours
Caging our souls
We took a trip to the lake
That Easter weekend

Lake waters frozen for miles
Stood in silence summoning
Bold feet to jump in
Through a hole in ice

Spirited minds, young
Played soccer on
Last year's grass
Stones thrown in
Murky waters for fun
Released a stench of
Decompose all around

Slouching through walking trails
Slipping in mud frozen glaciers
For them kids, all abound
A universal playground!

A chair swung in the wind
Hanging from a Cyprus limb
As birds flew above
As spring settled in

In far horizon at night
Lights sparkled and blink
Seemingly another planet
To the straining eyes

Spicy lamb curry,
A taste divine
Chicken wings, pork ribs
At supper we dined
Even juicy strawberries squirt
Echoed joys spurred within

Perhaps, most valued
My hour of soul was
The night spent sitting
By the old fireplace

Conversing our thoughts
Sharing views that brought
Friendships closer
Like minds merger

As the day erased
Till small hours, awake
Raking through themes
That we relate to, best
Screams of merriment reeked
In that cottage by the lake

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Myrtle Thomas 16 April 2009

Your visuals are very crisp and clear to the point of almost being there.What a great thing to enjoy and write about as well.A fine poem of family, friends and nature as well.

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Christine Kerr 16 April 2009

I felt like I was right there with you taking at all in, last years grass, and a touch of the other seasons, I'm also thinking, Only in Canada You say. beautifully said Deva

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Yelena M. 17 April 2009

'Lake waters frozen for miles Stood in silence summoning Bold feet to jump in Through a hole in ice..' - wonderful lines. You make the poetry alive in the mind of the reader by your usage words and inspiration creating a perfect imagery.Thanks for sharing, Deva. Best wishes. A.

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Catrina Heart 17 April 2009

A nice vivid image you have put here, nice poetic pictorial of the cottage by the lake. Your ending verses were so fabulous..........loved the whole poem........10

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Sandra Fowler 17 April 2009

Memories are made of this. I especially like to think of that hour of soul by the old fireplace. A very warming experience. Your recollections are very vivid. Kind regards, Sandra

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Savita Tyagi 10 August 2016

Beautiful. An outing by nature is so rejuvenating.loved the flow and imagery. Thanks for sharing.

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Rosalita Fernandez 04 May 2009

such beautiful imagry well done nice words used and chosen

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Allemagne Roßmann 21 April 2009

mystic celebration of the easters i must say with someone cherished in that cottage....a cottage long meant for Adam's apple and Eve's banana....10++

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Lalitha iyer 21 April 2009

Wish I were in the cottage by the lake.

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Noel Horlanda 21 April 2009

It's a lovely poem and mind you I'd like to stay in that cottage of yours by the lake. Oh! my pink tongue also would like to take a bite on that variety of foods you presented, pork, strawberries, etc. wow! Good idea, good work!

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