A Crow Complains Of His Bitter Voice Poem by kanav justa

A great poem Kanav - like the crow, I can't sing either!

Really liked this poem kana. But I agree with Bri Edwards comments as well. My main compliant is that the poem seems raw and unfinished to me. I personally feel like you have presented us with the gushings of your muse which for me are really just the skeleton of what your already wonderful poem could look like. I find myself looking for the flesh, the heart of kana, which it feels are lacking and make this poem merely 'exceptional' and not 'great' as it could be! Ha! Like Bri I will send you a more personal comment but only if you desire it.

Just outstanding! ! ! ! I really love the story, rhyme and moral, such a good write.

Very nice..., , , , , , , REALLLY Very very welldone...! ! ! ! ! ! !

How come, I too wrote a poem quite recently on the same subject! (May be 'great people' think alike! ! !) I will post it very soon! Enjoyed this sweetly rhyming poem much Kanav! A 10

how sweetly she tweets, complains the crow when i sing how guttural i sound just below his drooping brow tears rolled towards the ground beautiful expression superb 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

Thanks for your comment on my poem.I was drawn to your poet page and find here such beautiful poem, my first read. Not only you, but most of us feel the way you feel comparing ourselves with others whom we feel better than us.This makes us depressed. A lovelypoem, thakns for sharing.

ok, this now goes into July's 'a showcase of and for PH poets'. just your name and a link to this page will appear in a list this month (with mostly male PH poets) . thanks. bri :)

i think: May, not may bri ;)

PS: Don't let 'your' admiration for the 'lark's voice' turn you away from your own poems. Study the lark, don't just listen. Her secrets will be revealed and, even if you never sing like her, you will amaze yourself and eventually find your own true voice. Now this is what I call a real comment! : -)