And She Thinks Of Her Beloved Poem by kanav justa
And She Thinks Of Her Beloved
her lids conceal, not just the ache
but her dreams she shared with her love
the autumn in her eyes, awaits the spring
as she seeks him in the stars above
a smile upon her frowning face
she chuckles in the company of her mates
when alone she mourns and never stops
like an autumn leaf she slowly abates
she saves her tears for the next morn
for she knows, the sun won’t bring her joy
her frail heart like a paper torn
from memories of a lover boy
winter freezes her beating chest
and blur dwells in her eyes and face
her life runs in those endless loops
of memories entwined in time and space
the rising sun has lost it's worth
cool breeze never ease the pain
birds don’t tweet and sing in rhyme
no fun she finds in pouring rain
when trust and love and vows were real
why death it proudly came between
but death be not so proud and pleased
true love in hearts forever reign
but death be not so proud and pleased true love in hearts forever reign A great close to an otherwise melancholic poem..... The pangs of separation experienced by the survivor is so poignantly brought out ! Let time heal her wound! ! A GREAT write, Kanav!
Pangs of pain over unfortunate separation very poignantly expressed...........very touching indeed......Kanav.........
I absolutely love the close of your poem...like a flower you never want to see wilt. PEACE
her life runs in those endless loops of memories entwined in time and space The bereavement of a relative, lover, friend or for that matter anyone close to our heart of course is an emotional avalanche. Though the theme of the poem is melancholic, your style of narration is majestic.10/10
winter freezes her beating chest and blur dwells in her eyes and face her life runs in those endless loops of memories entwined in time and space superb expression great 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++
A lovely and very sad poem. I almost shed a tear as I read the last lines.
I'm speechless with the sheer magnetism of your beautiful lines and with such charming details with the truth that love is eternal! ! Superb write! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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10/16/2024 2:43:48 AM # 1.0.0
when trust and love and vows were real why death it proudly came between but death be not so proud and pleased true love in hearts forever reign......great lines, one of my fav poems now, great write Kanav...lovely