whole his life in days of gloom
he smiled and got things right
but a picture hanging on the wall
is too much of a plight
the echoes of his sweetest voice
he hears in dreams at night
all his dreams he now recalls
to fill heart with false delight
and the sun has set for the final time
his son would never rise
a picture hanging on the wall
is engraved in his gloomy eyes
the memories of his only son
he holds them real tight
in the corner of a lonesome room
a father weeps tonight
A very sad and moving write..The pain which a father feels for his lost son, you have penned it so well that each words are painfully poured out. Touching indeed. A Beautiful write Kanav. Loved reading it. I am just wondering, how come I missed this poem...
Very sad and touching indeed.....really touched my heart...........Kanav........feelings well portrayed.........
Sad and extremely moving. One must go on.. You presented this lamentation extremely well
the sun has set for the final time his son would never rise a picture hanging on the wall is engraved in his gloomy eyes….bereaving over the loss of the dearest sun brooding over his smiles……. great Poem full of Emotion my dear Poet. thank u. tony
Of a plight! ! And, with the echoes of life. Thanks for sharing.
A very beautiful poem......every line in this poem is just full of emotions.....wisely narrated....thank you for sharing and for comments also :)
the memories of his only son he holds them real tight in the corner of a lonesome room a father weeps tonight........its so poignant a story, beautifully narrated, makes you weep and thanks god for your parents and kin.......lovely write.........
There is nothing more heart breaking than father loosing his only son. Beautiful poem written with deepest emotions.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
what a beautiful poem, so sad yet so beautiful, thanx for sharing it with meand everyone else, keep up the great work