A Dance With You Poem by Danzen D...
A Dance With You
It's been long since we said hello
Been long since I confessed
You never fail to captivate me
With eyes that're always the best
A night so dim, the world so round
Yet brightest still you are
I long for you, as much can do
I want you, be with me..
And then your eyes have met with mine
And time was frozen again
A step to each other, both we take
Until our breaths we feel
You look at me, and I look back
A smile on both our faces
I hold your waist, my shoulder yours
And sway we go so close...
We laugh and we laugh, enjoying the time
Knowing it's very short..
All problems forgotten, the bond we are sharing
The truth of me and you
The song has stopped, and we stay still
Fighting the urge to let go
But it must be, farewell again..
I will never forget the dance with you
this poem, though decent showed a lot of emotions... you're really great... i hope sooner or later, others will notice that too... =)
i really really like this.. hahaha.... fascinating.. amusing.... entertaining... hehe... very nice write...^_^
nicely done... that's an understatement. it captivated me and like lorena, i'm very interested with who inspired you to write this. nevertheless, it was majestically done and made my imagination run.: D haha... keep writing danzen.
it's amazing how you make simple ideas bloom into a great poem.. keep writing Dan
Im curious about the person who inspired you to do this.. You have really pulled through a great emotional poem.. You really are a much better poet and writer than I am, my friend..
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/19/2024 5:47:36 PM # 1.0.0.1119
A poem of pleasantries! Good rhythm and nice read. Thanks for sharing.