A Dark Path

Rating: 4.8

A dark path
That is where you are headed
Keep messing with the wrong crowd
And you will be leaning toward a dead end
Pull your head out of the water
It is not too late to turn it all around
Concentrate on doing the right thing
So that you can make your loved ones proud

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 21 August 2009

indeed a lovely poem.......Thanks!

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Fiona Davidson 02 December 2008

Very wise words...like this...thank you...

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 August 2016

It is not too late to turn! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Howard Savage 13 January 2016

This is a great poem plus true poem Keep writing.

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Kate Lechoe 14 September 2015

Wise advice there. Keep it up

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Love it! A great write! ................

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Nimal Dunuhinga 01 December 2009

Wise and deep..........thank you so much for your brotherly advise and your great comment on 'Goods Train'.Good luck Comrade! sincere regards, nimal

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