A Day Full Of Anxiety... Poem by Priyanka Bhowmick

A Day Full Of Anxiety...

Rating: 5.0


A day full of anxiety,
my thoughts meandering around,
like a kite rafting in the sky.
A puff of wind in my mind inside,
as if there's no one to guide.
My emotions dumbfounded,
I love not, nor hate,
I weep, I cry, unaware of what is getting by,
I am all isolated, no friends beside.
My feelings rushes and crushes,
tears from my eyes they stream,
as if I am accused,
and my sentiments about to blow.
I know not this feeling,
nor am I hurt by any,
a day full of anxiety,
has left me depreciated by thoughts many.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 23 May 2009

Wandering thoughts anxious...good write Priyanka...sweet rhyming and a couple of good similes...thanks...10

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Carol Gall 23 May 2009

anxiety many thoughts good write

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

You have nicely composed the idea. 10++

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Ch J Satyananda Kumar 25 May 2009

A good composition about disturbing thoughts.

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what said was well said and that shows your merit 10marks

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Shashendra Amalshan 14 July 2009

well i start the day with lots of anxiety.... i know this feeling.. nice with love shan

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Indira Renganathan 03 July 2009

So many are there like you moody...so needn't have to have worry any...just be jolly and funny...'ll get over being moody...hearty poem 10++

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Subroto Chatterjee 10 June 2009

Yup...we've all been there before (and will continue to do so] from time to time..so just know that we are all in it together.. Cheers. Subroto

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Saadat Tahir 07 June 2009

priyanka...better get over it...its a fret of a life time days into weeks melt weeks to years a belt grey upon us before its felt very nice lines... acommon refrain but in well written lines cheers

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Brishti Mazumdar 04 June 2009

I loved your anxiety...well written..Brishti Mazumdar

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