A Day Full Of Anxiety... Poem by Priyanka Bhowmick

A Day Full Of Anxiety...

Rating: 5.0

A day full of anxiety,
my thoughts meandering around,
like a kite rafting in the sky.
A puff of wind in my mind inside,
as if there's no one to guide.
My emotions dumbfounded,
I love not, nor hate,
I weep, I cry, unaware of what is getting by,
I am all isolated, no friends beside.
My feelings rushes and crushes,
tears from my eyes they stream,
as if I am accused,
and my sentiments about to blow.
I know not this feeling,
nor am I hurt by any,
a day full of anxiety,
has left me depreciated by thoughts many.

Ejaz Khan 29 May 2009

Anxieties are nothing else but the growth pain, wish if it could come without pain. You narrate the inner turmoils beautifully.10+++

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Bonnie Collins 27 May 2009

Written very accuratly of how a person feels with anxiety, it is filled with many anxious feelings and emotions that go along with this horrible problem millions face, and I am one of them..... Very cleverly done.....

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 May 2009

An amazing piece, what have you composed in this poem is very true. Sometimes we also feel like that. 10 from me for the universal appeal of this poem.

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rohit sapra 26 May 2009

Moments of anxiety are part of this life and such moments can make a human feel weak. However, the thing to remember is that life is with a meaning if we try to learn from its every experience. I liked reading this poem of yours since it expresses how one can feel through the emotion of anxiety.

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what said was well said and that shows your merit 10marks

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Shashendra Amalshan 14 July 2009

well i start the day with lots of anxiety.... i know this feeling.. nice with love shan

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Indira Renganathan 03 July 2009

So many are there like you moody...so needn't have to have worry any...just be jolly and funny...'ll get over being moody...hearty poem 10++

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Subroto Chatterjee 10 June 2009

Yup...we've all been there before (and will continue to do so] from time to time..so just know that we are all in it together.. Cheers. Subroto

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Saadat Tahir 07 June 2009

priyanka...better get over it...its a fret of a life time days into weeks melt weeks to years a belt grey upon us before its felt very nice lines... acommon refrain but in well written lines cheers

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Brishti Mazumdar 04 June 2009

I loved your anxiety...well written..Brishti Mazumdar

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