A dream terrified,
have lost my sleep at night,
don't know the reason why,
it has captured my sight.
Dream about a little child,
who has lost his family,
he's all alone now,
crying bitterly.
His family in bloodshed,
lost life in a fight,
fight with a terrorist,
who destoyed them within a night.
The child can't speak,
but he calls me,
to provide him shelter,
helpless is he.
I try to run at his call,
but still cannot,
don't know what is stopping me,
I try to give it a thought.
While he cries,
blood falls from his eyes,
eyes that are innocent,
and my dream away it flies.
Flies away with the night,
and I wake up in a mood terrified,
thinking was this fact or not,
thinking of the family that died.
You are penning so well about all disturbing thoughts. If it fiction it is OK. But if fact, the situation requires to be given a serious thought.
A terrifying dream well narrated there...flowing poem, Priyanka...i liked...10
A terrifying dream and truth that wrenched your being and others who also have the same history..............10++++++++
Your terrified dream may terrify your mood, But it makes your verse very well composed. ...Brishti Mazumdar
The abrupt tone of it really brings the impacts out, with a steady flowing rhythm. A dream that would make one sit in thought, isn't it? I hope never to have that dream.
really terrifying dream.......my mind guesses its reality for some though my heart wants to disbelieve this fact...... terror expressed well... good one
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Cozy and nice write!