A Decayed Inn Poem by nimal dunuhinga

A Decayed Inn

Rating: 4.3


A skinny vagabond comes from afar,
and he himself doesn't know
where he comes from?
Or his destination.
Perhaps this could be a stopover.
He is only a tenant of the building
and it's belongs to a debutante
who lives in delusion.
Poor fellow needs a tinker to mend his soul
and he is anxiously searching a panacea.
Will he be able to find?
before he enlisted to the run away crowd.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 22 May 2014

Wow the guy below my comment surly knows how to comment.all I'm going to say is bravo! ! ! ! !

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Alison Cassidy 15 August 2009

Another spiritual message from your ever fertile pen. Beautifully composed. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 08 August 2009

Richly metaphorical. This young man does indeed need, ..'A tinker to mend his soul'. A very vivid story.10, for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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Lylyanna Pilewski 11 October 2006

iiiiiiiiii like it. Creates a great old tyme image. Lylyanna

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David Gerardino 01 July 2006

who lives in delusion, great line, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , nice poem...

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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