A Desert Flower Poem by Kateryna Polishchuk

A Desert Flower

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All times are nothing if you`re dead,
And our pleasure is just pain,
If you don`t see the soul you had
And understand your love is main…
Among hot sand a flower lives
And sweetly smells, has crystal eyes.
Nobody in its life believes,
That`s why the flower always cries…
It speaks about beauty soul,
About thoughts of darkness bloom,
It is alive, it has a goal
To take its heart from evil gloom.
It is alone in tears Sea,
Its petals hide all lovers blame…
In sand of desert you can see
It cries inside of heartless flame.
It waits for rain from the sky
To tear flesh into the chunk,
Like your nightmare…even my,
Like Sea breaks ship that is just sunk.
It blooms for us to show the world
Of its miracles, mystery.
About it all poets told,
When wrote the poems and were free.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sagar Shelar 13 March 2012

Just amazing poem. I dare to compare your writing style with T.S. Eliot's writing style. Your every new poem represents your talent's another side. You are really mysterious & different kind of girl. Keep it up........Angel

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VEER the ultimate boy 07 March 2012

lovely thoughts with lots of expression

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Binish Cd 07 March 2012

u r a good poet, giving great expression to an idea like the petals of a flower blooms.........another good poem.

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Sharon Smith 06 March 2012

'and the desert will blossom as the rose..' Lovely..Thankyou. Regards..Sharon.

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Pheko Motaung 05 March 2012

An outstanding poem! I am converted to your beautiful poems.

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Dr Antony Theodore 09 September 2015

It is alive, it has a goal To take its heart from evil gloom. It blooms for us to show the world Of its miracles, mystery. the flower in the desert has an aim to remove the evil from this world. so noble idea dear Poetess. thank you.

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Heather Wilkins 16 September 2013

a beautifully written poem enjoyed the read

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Macharia Kanyari 02 January 2013

So many things are evoked by this poem, mortality, love, time. Womnderful poem! ! !

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Allemagne Roßmann 10 October 2012

It is alive, it has a goal To take its heart from evil gloom. It is alone in tears Sea, superb lines and hats off to the poet

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Hans Vr 15 March 2012

The hot sand of our ego is everywhere and does not care if the wonderful flower of soul withers. But our soul is strong. it longs for rain, but it will not die and give us the sweetest of smells and sights if we just want to smell and look at it. Let's listen more to our soul and our life may bloom into a wonderful bouquet of adorable flowers. A very thought provoking poem, Ekaterina.

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